Topic: Gut Feeling
Sharris's photo
Wed 08/03/11 10:06 AM
Gut Feeling

Bravery, hidden behind this shield,
authentic only
to the heart that bleeds for it.

Once I thought you were a coward,
staying away
never speaking to the whimpers and faint breathing
left crumpled and heaped
beneath the pillars of cedars.
Left alone to feel...to feel.

In the still, echo resounds.

Impressive, unafraid, dauntless.
Even so you bled until you could no longer.
Perhaps I should have looked for you, then.
When I finally did look up, only
an impression remained.
A first? No second... just brave... lasting.

SadieLu 2011

no photo
Wed 08/03/11 12:37 PM
I like this Sadie..flowerforyou

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Wed 08/03/11 12:49 PM
Freedom........smokin

Sharris's photo
Wed 08/03/11 06:56 PM

Freedom........smokin

comes in many ways..thank you.

Sharris's photo
Wed 08/03/11 06:57 PM

I like this Sadie..flowerforyou

Thank you Ainjel

laura329's photo
Wed 08/03/11 08:30 PM
No regrets Sadie...just moving forward and seeing of what is and never giving up on what can be...right? Loved it!flowerforyou

Sharris's photo
Wed 08/03/11 09:50 PM

No regrets Sadie...just moving forward and seeing of what is and never giving up on what can be...right? Loved it!flowerforyou

yes, there is no time for regrets..thanks for sharing.

mig25's photo
Wed 08/03/11 10:29 PM
nice write . . . and you're right, there is no time for regret or anger.