Closer and closer, we get, you and I,
Inch by inch, it fills the hollow
Slowly- as if it’s entrance may be denied
Our eyes are locked-nothing about this moment weak or shallow
Finally, the journey completed -neither is scared-both of us sigh

Now to explore the surroundings within
Movement ensues-hearts pounding begins…like waves of an incoming tide
The crests become more intense-heat is abundant
We’ve built this storm-fighting for its strength-drenched outside
Release-our only acceptable winning incumbent

Faster and faster the tidal wave is near
Clutching and holding but not out of fear
The rhythm is found, it’s time to let go
Wanting to take you with me, as well, we both know
Then it comes crashing down and out pours our cries…

Hearts finally calming and just for a moment
Smiles touch lips, peacefulness-the reward for atonements
Adrenaline raced but the level is waning
Holding hands and kisses, we are exchanging
Just as we started-it ends with a sigh…

The emptiness is filled-leaving warm fulfillment inside.

This is like a love note tucked away in the back of your thoughts . . . it struggles to find the light yet wiht each smile it speaks. Wonderful work laura329, simply wonderful. You know I'm a fan.

i'll be back after my cold shower with feedback :)~ loved the nuances, innuendo's.... perfect!

Excellent write.....

I'll take three of these and then a life time to review daily,,,,,,as the sighs gasp out their finale burst,,that look in your eyes, upon placing your kiss,,,thats that part,,I truly,,,truly miss.....completed,,fullled, and wrapped together at its end,,,,,A VERY NICE WRITE!!! And very MOVING,,

Very nice.

Thanks everybody. Bastet...I'm a huge fan of your work, your compliment means alot. Up2us, thanks so much. Tazz-words with Smiley's - cant get better than that!Iam4u-thank you!

Nicely done

A fantastic write Laura...