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Edited by
kc0003
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Sun 07/10/11 10:21 PM
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I once knew all of your secrets
I could have directed you to all of your scars and told the story of each of them I knew what kind of day you’d had, just by the way you walked up the driveway my mind was once filled with the knowledge of you and now, as each day passes time becomes the great thief tic-tok, tic-tok away you go the second hand circles your once familiar voice fades so too does the sound of your frequent laughter tic-tok, there goes another part of you the important dates... your sleeping breath, now a desperate musing tic all of your favorite things -tok leaving me more and more to myself tic-tok, I find it impossible to recall your touch every second every minute every hour I curse the sadness that follows you regrettably, more than I embraced the joy that accompanied you oh how I wish I had remembered better kc `11 |
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I could hear your voice as I took each word in..Another fantabulous write kc..
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Very nice buddy. I enjoyed reading it very much!
- Josh |
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love, love it!! i wish you didn't stay away so long
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Edited by
Teditis
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Mon 07/11/11 12:38 PM
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Love it too!
Thank G-d for time... gives us what we need to move on. I can bearly remember "whatzherface"... but some sadness lingers... 
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Wow, this is beautiful! Thank you for sharing with us.
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kc....I like.
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Like the hands of her clock, shedding,,,falling off to be lost forever,,,,the hours,,minutes,,,seconds,,,all sheared,, missing,,
gone.....But forever will her kiss,,,,remain on your lips,,, Nice write man....
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I could hear your voice as I took each word in..Another fantabulous write kc..
thank you, you are always so kind
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Very nice buddy. I enjoyed reading it very much! - Josh i appreciate that Josh, and welcome
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Edited by
kc0003
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Mon 07/11/11 09:30 PM
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love, love it!! i wish you didn't stay away so long
but, but, i've been here the whole time... 
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taz & teditis
thank you both...
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Wow, this is beautiful! Thank you for sharing with us.
thank you for taking the time to read and post...
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thank you
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kc....I like. tease
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thank you guys for taking the time... |
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I was thinking the same thing Ainjel.
As I read, it was your voice in my head Kev ... your phrasing ... your pause ... the melancholy that so often accompanies a piece like this ... You always move me.
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inspiring - forever
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