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poppashroom's photo
Wed 06/29/11 02:19 PM
Edited by poppashroom on Wed 06/29/11 02:29 PM
My brow congested
A battling flood
A frown helps not
To fend off the salt plateau
Of determination

A rise above me
Feet grimace
With less than optimism

The journey begins

Unfurling water
Whisps of condensation
Cotton like

A world away

The journey begins

Trudging
Begrudging

But the journey begins

The merry smiles of achievement
Pass by
Pasted already upon those
Of success

A journey begun

But the sky is mine


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Wed 06/29/11 02:25 PM
Under Father sky. Nice. :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

bastet126's photo
Wed 06/29/11 03:43 PM
speaks of inspiration, found. love this too!! flowerforyou

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Wed 06/29/11 03:53 PM
"..but the sky is mine.."..Awesome..

thewaterbearer's photo
Wed 06/29/11 03:54 PM
Love it, gorgeousflowerforyou

poppashroom's photo
Wed 06/29/11 05:04 PM

"..but the sky is mine.."..Awesome..

indeed it is
as i'm sure it is yours

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Wed 06/29/11 07:00 PM
Awesome write....glasses drinker

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Thu 06/30/11 06:38 AM
Lovely. :)