Topic: Captured By Tears..... | |
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Tue 06/21/11 01:31 PM
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Captured By Tears Moments as a overture fade into ambiguity. Smiles become erroneous lies. Sweet words flow into peculiar emptiness. Love annihilates a heart, with sweet bitterness. A slow poison habitually flows into the soul. Heartache is tenderly captured by tears. Eternity fades revealing a eclipse of pain. Amidst a stigma of emotions a tortured martyr. Nails being driven into the mind of romance. Forever echoing, waves of remembrance. Upon solitary shorelines of delirium. Heartache is tenderly captured by tears. The stars at night become fragments of a broken heart. Picturesque sovereign stranger, sieged by yesterday. Melancholy blue skies, reflect depression inside. Abandoned castaway, shipwrecked by the promise of love. Poem: MHS©Copyright 2011 |
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wow.....way too familiar. shattered bliss, eloquently put
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..Far out I love that picture above your write..Nice write by the way...
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<-----------------HEY,,,YOU MAKIN FUN OF MY EYE HERE.
Nice write man,,and very DEEP,,,but very COOL..... And,,YOU could have used my eye,,I would have lend it to ya,, OK,,YOURS has a big tear,,,OK,,OK,,,lol |
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nicely done...
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Wow, very nicely done... it goes on in on, doesn't it?
Like the image too... |
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Thanks all....
Love truly can be a battlefield comprised mainly of brokenhearted casualties..... |
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I could feel the emotion captured in this piece, its currently how I'm feeling right.
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I could feel the emotion captured in this piece, its currently how I'm feeling right. Um... 1st post... welcome... |
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I could feel the emotion captured in this piece, its currently how I'm feeling right. Um... 1st post... welcome... |
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Let me say hello to Mz Poet....and like the hands on a clock,,with each tick forward,,we go on and on,,,and on,,,,and although the pain and sometimes the anger stay closed inside,,,its the new changes and frinds who you meet,,that pull you from all that.
May you meet many and have fun here reading and knowing,,your welcomed to stop in ANYTIME!!! Have a goodnight,,, |
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