Topic: Dark before Day
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Tue 05/31/11 07:35 PM
Is it the light which runs from the night.
Shinning so brightly in its mid-day.
Do they dis-like each other so much,
they can't both just play.
What lets the darkness in,
that allows our Sun to end.
Can it be that sleep draws it depths of blackness near.
Is it that lack of light which brings us fear.
Maybe its not the night which stops the light.
But the light which stops the night.
For it's in its rise, which coincides, with the nights demise.



Maybe its only us, who seperates the light from the night.
As our minds relax and grow tired,we provide their flight.:heart:



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Tue 05/31/11 09:02 PM
..Nice write..:thumbsup:

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Wed 06/01/11 11:29 AM

..Nice write..:thumbsup:
:heart: drinker Thanks Ainjel,,,I was bored and thought I'd type,,,,,:wink: Hope you been well......flowerforyou

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Wed 06/01/11 01:52 PM
I really liked that one Terry :thumbsup:

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Wed 06/01/11 08:44 PM

I really liked that one Terry :thumbsup:

Thanks Jerry,,I think I have become the Dead Poet,,,,lol
Looking within me for another view outwards,,,and trying to find my right channel,,,,,laugh
It seems there all snowy and staticeee,,,lolnoway

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Wed 06/01/11 08:49 PM
oh,,and by-the-way-Jerry,,a,,,since you were released,,I mean,,a,,let go fromyour stuff,,,HAS ANYONE mentioned,,,a,,,that MAYBE,,
I mean ,,,(I don't want to alarm you here,,OK?) BUT

You might WANT to glance in a mirror at your a,,a,,well,,FACE,,,it may have taken on an intirely DIFFERNT look to it,,and,,by any chance,,were you attacked by any wild animals while THERE???

laugh :banana: rofl


NICE pic man,,,scared rofl

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Wed 06/01/11 09:32 PM
:thumbsup:
especially love the last two lines

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Wed 06/01/11 11:02 PM

:thumbsup:
especially love the last two lines
:heart: Thank you much,,,and welcome to the poems area of thoughts,,,,:wink: flowerforyou

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Thu 06/02/11 09:30 AM
even the universe has a yin yang :) flowerforyou

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Thu 06/02/11 09:36 AM

oh,,and by-the-way-Jerry,,a,,,since you were released,,I mean,,a,,let go fromyour stuff,,,HAS ANYONE mentioned,,,a,,,that MAYBE,,
I mean ,,,(I don't want to alarm you here,,OK?) BUT

You might WANT to glance in a mirror at your a,,a,,well,,FACE,,,it may have taken on an intirely DIFFERNT look to it,,and,,by any chance,,were you attacked by any wild animals while THERE???

laugh :banana: rofl


NICE pic man,,,scared rofl
ok, I washed my face. better ??

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Thu 06/02/11 06:42 PM


oh,,and by-the-way-Jerry,,a,,,since you were released,,I mean,,a,,let go fromyour stuff,,,HAS ANYONE mentioned,,,a,,,that MAYBE,,
I mean ,,,(I don't want to alarm you here,,OK?) BUT

You might WANT to glance in a mirror at your a,,a,,well,,FACE,,,it may have taken on an intirely DIFFERNT look to it,,and,,by any chance,,were you attacked by any wild animals while THERE???

laugh :banana: rofl


NICE pic man,,,scared rofl
ok, I washed my face. better ??
noway A------------SURE Jerry,,THATS much better to,a,,
well,,,They say that Beauty is in th eye of the beholder.....bigsmile bigsmile ,,,,,,,so
a much better man..:angel:

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Thu 06/02/11 06:45 PM

even the universe has a yin yang :) flowerforyou
noway it DOES?

Oh,,,lol,,Glad to see ya here girly,,,,I thought ya done ran off with some young rap star.lol....:wink: :heart: flowers

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Sat 06/04/11 11:29 AM


even the universe has a yin yang :) flowerforyou
noway it DOES?

Oh,,,lol,,Glad to see ya here girly,,,,I thought ya done ran off with some young rap star.lol....:wink: :heart: flowers


bah!! i did, only i turned to see it was just pretty rhymes disguised. unwise. was i. i could never leave mingle, what were you thinking? :tongue: flowerforyou

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Sat 06/04/11 10:54 PM
I'm at work right now and I have to say thanks for keeping me awake. I liked this write.