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Hey just updated my profile what do you guys think? I'm sure there's room for improvement there so feel free to point anything out to me :)
Xlilix |
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The profile looks good. Though I would take out the "I wouldn't rate myself highly as a looker" part.
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The profile looks good. Though I would take out the "I wouldn't rate myself highly as a looker" part. I agree...because I enjoyed looking. |
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The profile looks good. Though I would take out the "I wouldn't rate myself highly as a looker" part. OMG please don't read the message i sent you. i thought you said you don't rate yourself highly as a hooker. my bad |
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Edited by
wux
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Mon 05/23/11 04:56 PM
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Girl, you look like a song. You're gorgeous, and so is your sister. I would think much more highly of your looks if you had a poster behind you in your room on the pic which showed Golda Meir or Sister Theresa in their prime. (In the prime of their fame.) Get rid of the bleech-blonde beeech. Unless she's your mother, of course, in which case please give her my best regards.
What could you do with an English degree? Write a play called "Romeo or Juliet". Or "The six wives and seventeen fluff-boys of King Henry the Eight." Or an epic "Pride and Punishment." "Wart and Pieced." The number of possible topics is staggering. Really, I was taken breathless you are so naturally gorgeous. Then I saw where you're from. That explains it. I especially like your pic in your ship which took a sudden 45-degree turn, north by norhtwest, to your left. I would leave in "I wouldn't rate myself highly as a looker." This is good, it shows that you have your sound judgement only when you are sober and not stoned. (Think this over. It is a compliment, actually. If you 'ave a basic grounding in 1970s vernacular.) |
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I'm a little tired but I did notice that you need a space between these two words. (cinema,going ).
Good Luck Al |
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Edited by
alltrades4you
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Wed 05/25/11 03:34 AM
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Also, Socializing is incorrectly spelled
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Edited by
2KidsMom
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Wed 05/25/11 08:40 AM
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^^^^^^^^^^^^ 
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Hey just updated my profile what do you guys think? I'm sure there's room for improvement there so feel free to point anything out to me :) Xlilix Looks great..Welcome to Mingle2. 
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The profile looks good. Though I would take out the "I wouldn't rate myself highly as a looker" part. I agree with that statement it sounds like you may have self esteem issue. Your adorable. Welcome and good luck on your search |
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I think your profile ROCKS, but it could be alittle longer,but not as long as mine(mine is ridiculously long, I talk alot. hehe) I think your pics are totally cute, and I would definitely take out that part about you "not being a looker".Your a cutie!!You may not think so, but you are, and you should.
Good luck, I hope you stay here with us for awhile.. its great to have you!!
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