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Topic: It BURNS when I BlinK
Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Tue 05/03/11 04:15 PM
I stare I stare for so long. I barely notice the furniture the walls that surround me My eyes burn as my brain sleeps I cannot blink I hears the sounds of windchimes in my ear and think if life was so breezy My back is numb from sitting for so long My eyes are dry from staring Am I asleep Am I awake Can I ask you again My soul to take perhaps I die while still awake When did the world become so fake......

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 05/03/11 04:33 PM
very nice

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Tue 05/03/11 04:59 PM
When did the world become so fake...... Nov.1 1901 at 10 am. Nice

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Tue 05/03/11 10:31 PM
When did the world become so fake...... Nov.1 1901 at 10 am. Nice Specifically, not 9:59 am. hahaha

winterblue56 Joined Sun 12/12/10 Posts: 2465	Wed 05/04/11 05:29 PM
Very nice Simone

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Wed 05/04/11 06:01 PM
Thanks!

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