Topic: Let me put breath to these words
Elquejode00's photo
Sun 05/01/11 08:46 PM
Let me put breath to these words that dwell deep within
This vessel called my body.
Let me express this emotional heart
That cries out it's vengeful song
My soul weakens to the wrongs of this world
The evil that man does on man
Why are the innocent always made victims?
Can you see hope threw the devastation of war?
These thoughts travel deep within my being
Like a comic book adventure that never ends
I grieve daily for the children who are slain
We tell our children there are no monsters
But the truth is the ones who victimize our children
Are the true to life monsters
I listen closely to the haunting whispers of my soul
I tremble in it's fear of mortality
This is were your faith in God is tested
I understand the freedom our Heavenly father has given us
And we so abuse this privilege
Why did we tortured and kill God's son
Was it because he was radical
Or the truth he spoke was beyond our earthly understanding
Why do I speak these words
Could it be the trouble this world is in
Or the dark hearted acts of man's sins
So I express my woes of madness
Do you believe in the human spirit
Or the majestic power of the Holy Spirit
These words flow out of me like a raging river
Pounding against the walls of my heart
The heart carries many mysteries
Which sometimes takes a lifetime to solve
From first love to painful heartaches
Do you ever think about death
Do you know what road your soul will travel
What am I trying to say with all these words
Not much just another soul crying out
Putting breath to these words

Sharris's photo
Mon 05/02/11 09:39 AM
This outpouring speaks of a time when no more can be contained. Thank you.

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Mon 05/02/11 10:50 AM
loved seeing you emotion and thoughts spilling out...niceflowerforyou

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Mon 05/02/11 11:12 AM
:) Good effort. Contained a lot of true emotion.