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Topic: "Making Love"
TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 07/08/07 05:53 AM
Just to feel your touch.
I know this much.
You set the fires.
Burning and how the desires.
Within are now awake.
My body aches.
Felling your fingers lightly touch my skin.
My mind starts to float and spin.
Slowly you leave a trail.
Of kisses as I exhale.
Just as your lips.
Brush across the tips.
And touch each nipple.
The sensation sends a ripple.
As I feel the need.
For you increase I plead.
Felling you touch every little spot.
Making sure not.
To forget what it takes.
Making sure there are no mistakes.
As I feel the heat of your breath upon my chest.
Your tongue seems to be obsessed.
Darting softly touching my skin.
Just inches within.
My flower as the juices begins to flow.
Your tongue darts in and out so slow.
Brushing every so lightly across my thigh.
As I let out a deep sigh.
Softly begging telling you I need you.
As we make love.
Our bodies fit like a glove.
As our bodies glistens from sweat the feeling of you inside me.
So close those magic hands, the rhythmic thrusts as we.
Stare into each others eyes feeling your muscles tense.
That dreamy look as ecstasy takes over that is so intense.
As we succumb to the pleasure that leaves us trembling upon.
Feeling the waves of orgasms slowly subsides as we hold on.
As I tremble from your touch, as I lay by your side.
Curled up in your arms till the feeling subsides.


pkh's photo
Sun 07/08/07 06:02 AM
Another beautiful one.Can't wait to feel that again.

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Sun 07/08/07 06:14 AM
Good Morn!Txs.Ummmm!ur makeing we want to head right back in to where I just came from.(the shower of course){lmao}That's freakin HOTT!gurlfriend,& I wuv it bearifically:tongue:Simply very deep & sensual,& ummm stirring all the right senses.Oh Yeah!Cy's very excited fair to say.Fantastic expression & emmotion within this Poem here.Wow!;=)
(((((((bear~hugs)))))))) :tongue: flowerforyou :heart: blushing
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Hey!hon.ur poem has 2 hits already for deletion KmadThis moderation crap is already getting out of hand here.Do I sense a lil jealousy going on.If we can't write with total expression & switch up our style & subject matter then I will not write any furthor.Then everyone losses K when we all stop writing.People need to stop hateing K because I'm getting a lil heated here.None of the Poets are going to like this at all K.Grow-up!!!!mad :angry: explode

Snugglesbyfire's photo
Sun 07/08/07 06:21 AM
Very nice, and I pressed do not delete.......Poetry is feelings, emotions, so how can anyone say to delete those, unless they are a robot with no emotions at all:smile:

irishlass's photo
Sun 07/08/07 06:27 AM
Hon, you just got another do not delete. Writing is an art form as such it should be appreciated. Those that do not appreciated should crawl back into the hole they have come out of. :smile: flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 07/08/07 06:31 AM
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TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 07/08/07 07:01 AM
((((Cybear))))))flowerforyou thank you so kindly for your words they do mean a lot to me. And well this one actually took me more time the I normaly have to spend on the others. To me this was harder for me too write. Hummm and here I had tried so hard to stay away from words that I thought would be vulgar to others. laugh laugh bigsmile Makes me now wonder why I bothered lol since some thought it should be deleted lol.

Pkh- I thank you once again for reading my poems your kind words do mean alot to mebigsmile


snugglesbyfire thank you so much and for also going against those that wanted it deletedflowerforyou

irislass-I do agree with you fully and thank you so much for reading as well.bigsmile bigsmile


But it does amaze me as well make me wonder what there reason was to delete lollaugh laugh no curse words used at all. Hummm cause it was the emontions of making love lol and to think in the sex & dating they have things twice as worse amazes me but I will bring it to Mikes attention for I'm a bit curious now lolbigsmile bigsmile

frankfk's photo
Sun 07/08/07 07:16 AM
A TOUCHY DESCRIPTION OF HUMAN SENSUALITY, WORDED WITH SKILLS, GOOD PIECE OF WORK, IMPRESSIVE TxsGal flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 07/08/07 09:12 AM
Frankfk thank you very much I really do appreciate your commenton the thread bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile flowerforyou

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Sun 07/08/07 10:31 AM
PKH=(((((bear~hugs~a~plenty))):tongue: flowerforyou :heart: blushing
Txs is truly an amazing friend & poet.U will hon.but obviosly it needs to be with the right 1.I wish to God that 1 was not sooo elusive & so diff.to locate for lonliness was not God's intentions,so then for my sake & my dear friend's sake we shall keep the faith.My friends are held within my prayers and we shall find that special one or perhaps they will find us.Your new bearific friend for always & a day.Godspeed!Cybear aka Steven.((((((((bear~hug)))))))):tongue: flowerforyou :heart:
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I'm very pleased to meet U frank.I hope ur enjoying yourself @JSH,a very special place indeed.Godspeed!Cybearglasses((bear~hug))+1 paw shake.
:tongue: embarassed

coco56's photo
Sun 07/08/07 12:02 PM
nice poem ill have a cold shower with you bear:wink: laugh

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Sun 07/08/07 01:24 PM
Whoa!Cy is very flattered,& I think my paws are twemblin againblushing
I'm bearifically happy that I have this luxurious pelt to hide my blushing.U ladies in the the JSH house are making Cy's heart go pitter-patter quite frequently.I just may have to push forward my appt.with my Bearanarian,I can painly see that now(lmao)(((((((bear~hugie)))))))
:smile: :tongue: flowerforyou blushingGodspeed!Cybear;=)

s1owhand's photo
Sun 07/08/07 01:26 PM
hot stuff bigsmile drinker smokin

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Sun 07/08/07 01:33 PM
Beautiful...erotic, well written and beautiful~flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 07/08/07 01:54 PM
(((Cybear)))flowerforyou ya just way too much I do thank you for all your kind words indeed I'm totaly flattered.blushing

coco- thank you very much humm shower humm sounds pretty good to me right now lol watch out Cybear ya better be moving over lol.

s1owhand- humm thank you also, don't write too many of these humm actaully like my 3 one with this one being a tad warmer lol

MsWizard-thank you very much have read yours as well and they are very good indeed thank you for the kind words they do mean a lotbigsmile blushing flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 07/08/07 06:29 PM
Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ((((( Puddin Cup ))))

Quite warm in here i must say,,, flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Sun 07/08/07 06:51 PM
Txsgal,I'd be curious to no why too,that some one would hit delete,on such a true subject.It's not like were kids,and never experienced this.Keep writting your poems are beautifulflowerforyou

T00Lfan's photo
Sun 07/08/07 06:57 PM
http://www.projectplaylist.com/musicsearch?searchfor=tool+4+degrees&search=search

If you guy's like stuff about sex...check that link out and listen to the song.

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Sun 07/08/07 07:16 PM
Ahh simply breath taking Gurlyflowerforyou

summerlady's photo
Sun 07/08/07 07:17 PM
Beautifully written, Txs! Ooooooooooo, it's been much too long.

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