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LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 04/05/11 01:47 PM
Tranquil thoughts have brought me back Damaged goods, lay upon my soul Past has written, the present weeps unfolding words that cut like a knife my thoughts, "once was lost", could find its way home' Darkness knocks upon this door. Plagued by doubt, the who i am to be Tranquility once lived in me I've pondered the world and all it holds, looking for my way home. Silence fills this empty soul Darkness knocked upon this door. Scaring all that once was known.

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 04/05/11 02:15 PM


LeighAnna9 Joined Sun 08/16/09 Posts: 5638	Tue 04/05/11 04:49 PM
Lovely write.

LexFonteyne Joined Thu 12/07/06 Posts: 32131	Tue 04/05/11 04:59 PM
Beautifully done! Especially like "Past has written, the present weeps" Very evocative!

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Wed 04/06/11 06:46 AM
Nice... (((D)))

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 04/06/11 04:48 PM
Tranquil thoughts have brought me back Damaged goods, lay upon my soul Past has written, the present weeps unfolding words that cut like a knife my thoughts, "once was lost", could find its way home' Darkness knocks upon this door. Plagued by doubt, the who i am to be Tranquility once lived in me I've pondered the world and all it holds, looking for my way home. Silence fills this empty soul Darkness knocked upon this door. Scaring all that once was known. [/quoteIn this transquility of thoughts and dreams,,you become more of who your soul needs you to see. Finding that core, once so solid filled with imaginations, and goodwill..Allow your soul to fill once more with all the love you've lost,,and all your pains, changed to smiles for this world to see,,,,as you find,,your best to BE,,,so once again you can say,,I LOVE ME! Troubled times and troubled thoughts,,melt away in a room full of hope and God's amazing beauty in everything you can touch or see... YOU live for one reason D,,,,To have ALL you need within YOU, and know your someone very special inside and out.. I love ya girl. NOW----->

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 04/10/11 06:48 AM


Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Sun 04/10/11 07:02 PM
that touched my heart more then any poem i've read.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 04/12/11 10:03 AM
Letting go doesn’t mean giving up, but rather accepting that there are things that cannot be. -- Anon Blessed am I ... ((( Family )))) Much love... much love

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 04/13/11 12:01 PM
'feeling the words'

burgundybry Joined Mon 03/05/07 Posts: 8084	Wed 04/13/11 12:36 PM
Letting go doesn’t mean giving up, but rather accepting that there are things that cannot be. -- Anon Blessed am I ... ((( Family )))) Much love... much love "Life's lessons learned" (((Denise)))

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