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Topic: what should I alter or add?
dr2nice Joined Sun 04/03/11 Posts: 10	Mon 04/04/11 02:19 PM
Still kind of putting it together, know I need more pics, and I know it's verbose, but that part is me in a nut shell. Anything stand out? Any red flags? Thanks.

LeighAnna9 Joined Sun 08/16/09 Posts: 5638	Mon 04/04/11 02:24 PM
It's very long. I have a short attention span so I stopped reading part way through. Maybe lose the details about your previous marriages? Just the fact that you're divorced should be enough.

arizona2011 Joined Wed 03/30/11 Posts: 3	Mon 04/04/11 04:23 PM
I agree with LeighAnna, lose the divorce story. Very well, written but keep it simple. If the ladies are interested in knowing you more, they will ask. That will give you more to converse with her and open up more rather than reading it all on one page. Good Luck.

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