I recently updated my profile so tell me what you think of me and my profile, thanks!

The Shiki rates this profile an A-. MUCH better.

Very well done!

i like your pic.

I didn't see the original, so I can't compare.

The Good:

- Without saying such, it is very apparent that you are looking for someone relatively close to your own age. If a guy doesn't get that, it's his problem.

- Your profile pic is great. You have a very pretty face, a nice smile, and it shows you having fun. Change it only it if something tops it.

- You mention a lot of what you enjoy doing giving plenty of date ideas and topics for conversation.


The Bad:

- The last part of your profile paragraph is redundant. That's a quick edit. No biggie.

- The text lacks a certain sense of personality, meaning it focuses on details too much. Show a sense of humor, talk about movies/books, family....whatever. You can speak in generalities but pick something that means really means something to you. It will show an understated depth to generate questions and interest. Some make up for personality in photos, but a little of both is usually best.

Disclaimer:
My own profile serves a certain purpose at the moment, so it is by no means a model example. Also, profile writing can often take several edits before you get it to the point you want it to be. So, do not think I am being overly negative. I must have tried 20 or more profiles before I began receiving plenty of responses. I tend to learn the hard way.

actionlynx, The Shiki already rated this profile an A-. Therefore, it is good. Consider revising what you wrote. It is much better than you are giving her credit for.

The Shiki has spoken.

P.S. Care to post your profile for it to be rated?

A) I have an opinion based on my experience. You have yours.

B) My profile is set up to be a deterrent. So far it's working. No need to be rated.

C) When you have reached an average of 30 new views per week, or have 150 profile views in 2 weeks, or a month with over 300 views, get back to me. Until then, you haven't even come close to what I've received.

D) Don't even respond to this because I'm not going to waste my time in a flame war over having the last word.

actionlynx writes "My profile is set up to be a deterrent."

Why are you looking to deter people? Were you not hugged enough as the child? Were you The Weakest Link? Did you drink too much bitter beer?

Turn that frown upside down, camper, and put a smile on that kisser, for today is a Shikerrific Day.

Thanks Shiki