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I haven't written a poem in years.
This is in no particular format, completely random, but it does mean something to me. Why can't they see When shes playful and lighthearted They have rolled the die That is in fact, just the face it has displayed When they roll it tomorrow Intriguing, sensitive, imaginative she will be Once more the next day Nervous, in need of reassurance, in need of affection possibly You see, She can be Who ever she chooses to be Who ever she feels to be When ever she feels it necessary Like a chameleon So easy to change Blending in everywhere with swiftness and ease But if you decide, to choose a favorite of these You will be left like the others Away with the breeze Yes quickly, that easily. |
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Hello :)
I must admit that i was taken aback to find someone out here who could actually be really creative in English and still make sense! Your poem was very thought provoking. It made me realize that although our lives and the way we behave is in our hands, sometimes its just the opposite and we rather seem to be controlled by our moods and things that happen around that affect us. Unfortunately, people seem to care more about what other people think about them and so are in a constant state of doubt. Little do they realize that a strong character is actually the pioneer who does it all differently. Like you. Thanks for the great poem. And Id be happy if I knew your name, miss. |
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I haven't written a poem in years. This is in no particular format, completely random, but it does mean something to me. Why can't they see When shes playful and lighthearted They have rolled the die That is in fact, just the face it has displayed When they roll it tomorrow Intriguing, sensitive, imaginative she will be Once more the next day Nervous, in need of reassurance, in need of affection possibly You see, She can be Who ever she chooses to be Who ever she feels to be When ever she feels it necessary Like a chameleon So easy to change Blending in everywhere with swiftness and ease But if you decide, to choose a favorite of these You will be left like the others Away with the breeze Yes quickly, that easily. i added to your poem you may have reasons to see what has been ahead as feeling lost in your own little soul as a new day may arise but yet you have time to blend in with loved ones that wish to be near but yet there may had been changes when another comes your way to make you feel negative when it was not to had even been so you quickly change for your ownself and not others to make them feel hey i can change her/him thats not the story that shall be told you choose of who you are and not others that tend to change your true way |
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Very nice.
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Hello :) I must admit that i was taken aback to find someone out here who could actually be really creative in English and still make sense! Your poem was very thought provoking. It made me realize that although our lives and the way we behave is in our hands, sometimes its just the opposite and we rather seem to be controlled by our moods and things that happen around that affect us. Unfortunately, people seem to care more about what other people think about them and so are in a constant state of doubt. Little do they realize that a strong character is actually the pioneer who does it all differently. Like you. Thanks for the great poem. And Id be happy if I knew your name, miss. Thank you for taking the time in reading. I agree, caring too much or all the time about what other people think can cloud our perspective of who we really are. i added to your poem you may have reasons to see what has been ahead as feeling lost in your own little soul as a new day may arise but yet you have time to blend in with loved ones that wish to be near but yet there may had been changes when another comes your way to make you feel negative when it was not to had even been so you quickly change for your ownself and not others to make them feel hey i can change her/him thats not the story that shall be told you choose of who you are and not others that tend to change your true way Thank you for adding! I really enjoyed reading it over and over. It's great advice and carries a wonderful message. Very nice.
Thank you for reading |
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iam4u
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Tue 03/29/11 06:36 PM
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I met this chameleon, so sweet her tongue of lies,
so giving with everything she had, she was never down or sad. I gave her everything I had, with all that implies.. She was my light, my soul-mate,to finally be at my side. Then I found out, she had way to many things to hide. Now we're apart, as I carry what's lift of my heart.:broken-heart: Great write,,My friend,, IF,,I'd only read THIS a year ago,,,, Thanks for sharing..... |
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I met this chameleon, so sweet her tounge of lies, so giving with everything she had, she was never down or sad. I gave her everything I had, with all that implies.. She was my light, my soul-mate,to finally be at my side. Then I found out, she had way to many things to hide. Now we're apart, as I carry what's lift of my heart. Great write,,My friend,, IF,,I'd only read THIS a year ago,,,, Thanks for sharing..... Awwwwww what a sad poem!! I'm sorry But...not all chameleons are the same |
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I know,,THATS why I'mstill here,,,,
But thank you for adding to my thoughts as to know,,nice ladies do come around.... |
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