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Topic: Trust,,,,,,,,,,,,,for Kiss!
iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/29/11 10:06 AM
In your eyes I see your spirit, your all. Within your arms, your love lets me know, I'll never fall. Feeling and knowing that in you my dear, I have no-fear. Your my light in every dark moment, my touch to always feel. You keep me warm inside, just knowing so much, your the real deal. Never have I felt more secure within a friends heart. You show me your honesty, your love, I know your never part. Honey, with you at my side, you make me feel you, World-Wide. If ever I should be killed or die, just know my sweet baby girl, with you I truly did, fly.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/29/11 10:17 AM
I hope you like this,,it took me four minutes,,as it was easy to draw from my own personal relationships that I did FEEL this,,,,,,

Kissesz Joined Fri 03/25/11 Posts: 106	Tue 03/29/11 10:29 AM
I hope you like this,,it took me four minutes,,as it was easy to draw from my own personal relationships that I did FEEL this,,,,,, That was very sweet Thanks for writing it! I could also relate feeling this way for certain friends.

red_lace Joined Sat 04/17/10 Posts: 7247	Tue 03/29/11 10:52 AM
So which Kiss did you mean? Singular or plural?

wux Joined Wed 07/29/09 Posts: 7426	Tue 03/29/11 01:39 PM
I am not a literary man, I can't tell a good poem from a bad one, but it's funny you titled this "kiss for trust". In my country, Ontario, this is a "kiss for trust day". People are encouraged to kiss strangers on the street, in libraries, at the public lavatories, anywhwere; it is supposed to symbolize trust in your fellow humans, because we say with the kiss "I trust you don't have a venerial disease." The government says it's supposed to improve the economy. The whole town looks deserted. This day Ontarians sure save some dough, which they would spend, otherwise.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 03/30/11 08:19 PM
I hope you like this,,it took me four minutes,,as it was easy to draw from my own personal relationships that I did FEEL this,,,,,, That was very sweet Thanks for writing it! I could also relate feeling this way for certain friends. It was a pleasure,,,,Glad ya liked,,,,and glad we're friends,now,,,

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 03/30/11 08:24 PM
I am not a literary man, I can't tell a good poem from a bad one, but it's funny you titled this "kiss for trust". In my country, Ontario, this is a "kiss for trust day". People are encouraged to kiss strangers on the street, in libraries, at the public lavatories, anywhwere; it is supposed to symbolize trust in your fellow humans, because we say with the kiss "I trust you don't have a venerial disease." The government says it's supposed to improve the economy. The whole town looks deserted. This day Ontarians sure save some dough, which they would spend, otherwise. Hey Wux,,your a better talent at literary than ME,,wink,and THSI,,was FUNNY,,maybe I have some Canack blood in me I didn't know it,,,lol,,It was just something that rolled out as it was written for a friend here,,named kissesz,,,who I just call,,Kiss,,, so thats how that LOOKED on the name of my poem...but hey GLAD YA READ it man,,and thanks for adding this it made it much more interesting.....

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Unknow Joined Thu 04/01/10 Posts: 1482	Wed 04/06/11 11:16 AM
good poem!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 04/06/11 09:40 PM
good poem! Thank you Iba,,,,,and its great to see another writer on here,,,,may your glass never be empty...

Dict8 Joined Tue 11/24/09 Posts: 7822	Wed 04/06/11 09:43 PM Edited by Dict8 on Wed 04/06/11 09:50 PM
What about....Trust.....for Alice Cooper? I'm not really a big KISS fan........

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 04/06/11 09:56 PM
What about....Trust.....for Alice Cooper? I'm not really a big KISS fan........ True THAT!!!!!