tell me what you think i left out or just rate it in general.

Hello, nyarly. :) I took a look at your profile and I was surprised at how young you are. The beard can be misleading. You also stated that it is temporary, and though I see nothing wrong with wanting to grow one, it may be good to upload pictures that shows how you look without it.

Your profile description is good, though if you can improve the flow or continuity, it will look better. But this is just my opinion, mind you. Welcome to Mingle and good luck. Don't forget to join us in the forums so people can get to know you. :)

thanks for the tips