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I have photos now
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Shiki rates this profile an B/B+.
The pictures are fantastic (A+). However, we have to deduct points for grammar. Your profile text is horrific. "Im down to earth will be by your side throw thick and thin when your down im always around to pick up all your troubles and turn them all around and lend my sholder to cry on im loving careing kindhearted and respectful you will never get left behind and always treated with respect" Pitiful. D- for the text. Consider the following rewrite: "I'm down to earth and will be by your side through thick and thin. When you're down, I'm always around to pick up all your troubles and turn them around for you. I'll lend my shoulders and yammy cakes to you so you can cry on them. Of course, real men never cry, but if you feel the need to cry, go right ahead. I'm loving, caring, kind-hearted, and respectful. You will never get left behind, and you will always be treated with respect." Shiki |
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