I am new and was just curious on how my profile looked? If needs "something" please let me know. I can take the constructive criticizium. It's been 12 years and I am a bit rusty with the whole dating thing so any help will be much appreciated.

Willow19801

i hope you get comfortable quickly, because you look like you will be one beautiful social butterfly. use the forums to help get comfortable. good luck and enjoy the site

aww thank you hun. That was very sweet of you to say. I am looking forward to making some awesome friends!

Needs more nudity.

Ha ha...just kidding. Don't try it...it will get you banned. I did once and everyone freaked.

Thanks for the heads up lol. I will take that into consideration!

Nooooo worries!!

they only suggestion I have is to remove your restrictions for who can contact you...you will meet great people here of all ages, genders, etc that will likely want to become friends!

I agree. Take off the restrictions and you will meet more people and go from there. You will have fun if you do that!!!!

Shiki rates this profile a B+. Here are my recommendations on how to approve it.

1. Look at Shiki's profile. That is the type of guy you should be looking for. Use THAT when deciding whom you should restrict.
2. You seem to have some kind of weird metal in your eyebrow. That may be a bad picture. If you can repost a picture without the weird metal, that would be better.
3. Grammar. Allow me to clean this up for you. Here is your profile.

"Well I am 30 years old, I just got out of a 12 year relationship. I am very shy when I am around new people but once I get comfortable I am a social butterfly."

As a 30-year-old, you should have better grammar. Here are my modifications.

"Well, I am 30 years old. I just got out of a 12-year relationship. I am very shy when I am around new people; however, after I get comfortable, I am a social butterfly."

Still, a great profile.

Shiki

oh ...I thought that was going in a whole different direction...ya know...naughty Shiki...back to your cage Shiki

I'm kinda disappointed *sigh*

Well thank you for the the pointers. I know I should have better grammar and I try, but I am dyslexic and I have have some learning disabilities so my grammars not the best. I will take a look at your profile cause you seem very nice. I will also take your tips into consideration. Thanks.

LOL...beware of shiki Some men just can't be beat on or run over enough

shiki...where is my beer?
Don't make me get my frying pan out

Yes, beware of the power of the Shik-meister!!!

As far as your beer goes, fireflysgirl, you never said whether you wanted me to bring it to you with me wearing clothes or not.

you said a woman's job was to cook, clean, & take care of the bedroom...telling you what to, or NOT to, wear is not in my job description

neither is beating you with the frying pan, but that is so much fun I can't resist

Shiki likes pain, so that's all good. As for how I bring the beer, definitely naked. Make sure you are that way, as well.