Why may I ask, are you here,,right now,,reading me?
YES,,I'm talking to you. Are you seeking to FEEL me?
Do you really want to know what makes me tick,
Or are you simply bored and passing some time, tick, tick, tick.
What could my words tell you, that you don't THINK, you already know?
Yes,,I know,,your thinking this is stupid, and your going to go.
NOPE, your not leaving me, until you fully read me.
I know because I'm in your head, up there with all the, living, and dead.
Your wanting to feel amused, see, reading helps you feel, unused.
Because everyday, your feeling that you could do better.
Passing time on here, reading, needing, your a real post setter.
I bet sometimes you do laugh out laud, snickering feeling so proud.
But I also know you feel your pain, its here with me inside your brain.
I can't tell you WHY? and I know that it made you cry.
You live to think you have it hidden, because really, it was forbidden.
Your thoughts and the way they all lay, your not a person to stray.
You see, your now feeling me, inside your head with all I see.
So tell me, did you ever think through reading, the writer could see.
What makes you think your not who you want to be.
From in here, you look like you, to me.
Still thinking this is nuts, huh?,,well WHY did you STOP,,
Then come back to finish?,If I KNOW THAT,, then how can that be?
Just keep saying,,,your not really inside my head with me....

loved it!

This is really creative . . . and more than likely more true than most people will admit

THEY,,made me right THIS,,,I told you all not to read THIS.
STILL,,your WANTS,,YOUR DESIRES,,had to BE,,,,didn't they?
Now,,,your HERE,,,where YOU were warned not to come-in and SEE!

YOU WANTED TO BE HERE, so HERE is where it shall take you.
INTO that vast emptiness of YOUR MIND..
WHERE truly,,,only IN THERE YOU CAN FIND!


That void of feelings, lost and found...Letting you KNOW.

THEY'RE ALL STILL AROUND!





welcome INTO MY HEAD.....................










A place we trace,,try to reconize a face, hang, bang, use some slang.
but as to its END,,,,,,,THAT will ALWAYS---------DEPEND?








Just a walk,,,with the writer, who seen more in you, THAN YOU!

i think this is inspired writing
it makes me wonder about the inspiration
so it is recommended reading
for we should all learn how
to receive such gifts and
share our thoughts and feelings
while we are here

Thanks for the replies and it is just my play.

And Slow,,,it IS nice to feel I might cause a creative thought within someone's mind... Thanks for your words,,,,

I'd answer those questions but I did not read this so I don't know what you asked....

WELL...reading THIS,,,MIGHT be a small THOUGHT THEN,

I know,,it has to many words.

I WATCHED YOU SLIGHTLY SKEEM THROUGH,,, MANO..

..yes IT does.........have TOO,,,, many words

Cheers dude good 1 there

nice "T"

Thanks for all the reads you guys,,and gal,,,wink,
After four years on here,,its tough to come up with ANYTHING,,new to spark an imagination...

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