Topic: The last swim with my Valentine
Ash36's photo
Sun 02/13/11 12:43 AM
[This isnt my creation] .Our Last Swim © Renee’ For my beloved Anne Mary Simon(who died of cancer)-


An Image of you in a cloud rolls by The sky opens up, somewhere in my mind A vision of you in a pale blue dress Tears falling down, you took my breath Memories of you . . . Rain will always hide these tears in my eyes When the thunder laughs my soulwill die Will I hear your voice? Will I touch your skin? Will the ocean waves let me in? The time is near, the time is nigh To answer the call, to answer the cry My head still spins, my body aches The wind stings my eyes, my face I look around, no one’s there Will anybody notice, will anyone care . . . I sit on this beach, your beach I see the waves roll in endlessly I hold you tight against my bosom Tears fill my eyes as I see you running into the ocean You are laughing and so happy Memories of you . . . It’s time to take our final swim My eyes fill with tears I can’t move, but I must You are waiting for me My legs ache, my body is frozen You are calling me, “come swim Renee’ “ Memories of you… I feel the warm ocean lapping at my feet I slowly walk deeper, and deeper Still holding you so tight “Please don’t leave me!” I desperately cry Stay with me a while longer Don’t leave me yet I am holding you so tight I feel you touch my face I feel your loving embrace I see your warm smile “Please Anne, stay a while” I see the last glitter of your eyes Opening the urn, I see you leap and dive I see you swimming around me Why are you so pale and grey? Then the reality strikes deep into my heart This is our last swim together Why are you smiling? Why are so happy? Why do you want to leave me soquickly? Why? Why? Why? Walking from the water I turn to look for you I catch a glimpse of you You look so happy my love Then my heart skips a beat I see you wave then turn away Swimming and having fun Memories of you… Sitting on the beach Watching the ocean Knowing that you’ll always be happy now I will visit you soon my beloved Anne Soon we’ll swim together again Rest in Peace my sweet love Rest in Peace

dreamwish's photo
Sun 02/13/11 01:31 AM
this is cool i love it.

Ash36's photo
Sun 02/13/11 04:50 AM
Its a pain in the butt when a valentine dies

bubblybabe023's photo
Sun 02/13/11 10:16 AM
awww babe thats sooo cute <333!

Ash36's photo
Sun 02/13/11 10:25 AM

awww babe thats sooo cute <333!



jeez., brookie, i never thought you would show yourself here..lol


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Mon 02/14/11 07:33 AM
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