message me to tell me what u think is missing?

Pics are nice. But, as a friend I have to tell you that your profile sounds pathetic!! Like you are willing to settle for anybody or anything!! Set your standards & don't back down!! Never let a woman think you're a pushover!! You're too sweet of a guy to get a gal like that!!

Dude your head is sideways and the other pic has a baby in it. Far too many pervs on the net to be giving them eye candy on a adult dating site. You need a variety of pics inside and out with at least one full body shot. Main pic should be a close up with big smile that shows you have teeth, we like teeth!

As for the interest it's a given you wanna stick your tounge in her mouth should you get the chance, so why not try interest that don't screm I wanna get laid like yesterday. And the testimonial of you being good in bed, how is that going to aid you in getting a girlfriend?

As for the body of text it reads painfully. Who wants a needy doormat desperate for anyting with a pulse to message him. You just need to keep it simple. Tell us a bit about you, make it ligt and fun. Then talk about **** you like, what you do on days off blah blah. Then finis with the kind of girl you want to meet. Is she mouthy, shy, outgoing, a bookworm? Be descriptive so she can see a bit of herself on the page.