I have a story to tell. I once had a love. A very special person who was beautiful, nice personality, enjoyable to be with. Spent a day at the lake on the dock just holding each other and watching the boats pass by. Anyway, she died the next week in a car wreck. Broke my heart. This is a true story. And of course I wrote it for her.,

well I'm going to write a poem about this. I know that I'm really not that good at it, but I did my best. Some of the words are from the rock band the Moody Blues, but some of them are mine.

HERE IT IS:

Whilst I was walking in a cave with a lantern in my hand, I saw a web, but below the web was a beautiful flower. A flower that reminded me of my long lost love. I thought to myself as I wepted,
"Wished I could be in your arms again to be won with your love."

The End.


Well I tried. I think I can get better at this if I took more time an thought. Probably could have added more to it.

This is an awesome write, good job feel free to write more and whatever comes to your mind.

VERY,,,,,,,COOL,,,,I like it,,,,Keep on being YOU,,man,,
This for your first,,is GREAT,,really..

Just let the words/thoughts flow naturally Zim...

sometimes the less said has great power.

Welcome to our home..

Ahhhh....Thank you everybody for making my day.

Really, really nice! Sometimes looking for words to express yourself helps soothe the soul.

From a literate view point it's atrocious.
You must understand what poetry really is.
Poetry is one's feelings put into words.
Often times they need not to rhyme at all.

Think about what you want to say, and how
you want the reader to interpret your meaning.
Now tell your story using your pure emotional
feelings and your God given thoughts. Sometimes
you will need to substitute words to make them rhyme.

As with all things, patience will pay off
as you will improve with practice.

Thanks for your help.