Topic: Love is Like Nature
TennisLuvr's photo
Tue 01/04/11 06:17 PM
So, I was randomly sitting by the window watching a thunderstorm, and this just came to me, nothing special, but yea:

The Nature of Love
I slowly pull back the curtain and I look outside.
The sky has turned dark, engulfed in blackness, like an unmended heart with layers of battle scars.
Suddenly with a roar, the sky is ripped into pieces.
Rain pelts down from above with the force of anger behind it.
The tiny little droplets remind me of shed tears of a broken heart, desperately trying to find some release, comfort, closure after a failed love.
The nearby leaves dance, a hypnotizing dance, as they're blown by that force, almost as if they are confused by what direction they should go in, stuck in a trance,a repeating cycle.
The leaves on the nearby trees rustle, fighting not to enter that maelstrom.
Wailing, screeching, and howling could be heard for miles, the wind trying to have a voice and be heard.
The trees are swaying from side to side, back and forth. A fight to stand against the force of the wind.
I start to move side to side, back and forth, entranced by the rhythm, battling the wind with them.
The trees stand their ground.
Time passes, time stops.
I stand rooted in place. I can feel my breath against the window fogging it up.
The cool, crisp air coursing through my veins, making me shiver.
Goosebumps form across my skin.
Suddenly, a bright light catches my eye.
The rain, wind, thunder and lightning abruptly stop.
The clouds part, a beam of light shines through, like a glimmer of hope.
The sun is smiling down, freed from being caged for so long.
Nature was happy again.


RainbowTrout's photo
Tue 01/04/11 06:31 PM
What a wonderful poem and delightful to read. I love the human feelings and emotions engaged in the telling of the phenomena you experienced.:smile:

TennisLuvr's photo
Sun 01/23/11 06:21 PM
Thanks RainbowTrout :).:smile:

Ladylid2012's photo
Sun 01/23/11 06:24 PM
very nice flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 01/23/11 08:59 PM
welcome

officialse7en's photo
Wed 01/26/11 09:47 AM
Edited by officialse7en on Wed 01/26/11 09:47 AM
how you doing? i'm a conscious brotha and that poem was very detailed and peaceful. keep doing your thing!blushing

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Sat 03/12/11 12:05 PM

So, I was randomly sitting by the window watching a thunderstorm, and this just came to me, nothing special, but yea:

The Nature of Love
I slowly pull back the curtain and I look outside.
The sky has turned dark, engulfed in blackness, like an unmended heart with layers of battle scars.
Suddenly with a roar, the sky is ripped into pieces.
Rain pelts down from above with the force of anger behind it.
The tiny little droplets remind me of shed tears of a broken heart, desperately trying to find some release, comfort, closure after a failed love.
The nearby leaves dance, a hypnotizing dance, as they're blown by that force, almost as if they are confused by what direction they should go in, stuck in a trance,a repeating cycle.
The leaves on the nearby trees rustle, fighting not to enter that maelstrom.
Wailing, screeching, and howling could be heard for miles, the wind trying to have a voice and be heard.
The trees are swaying from side to side, back and forth. A fight to stand against the force of the wind.
I start to move side to side, back and forth, entranced by the rhythm, battling the wind with them.
The trees stand their ground.
Time passes, time stops.
I stand rooted in place. I can feel my breath against the window fogging it up.
The cool, crisp air coursing through my veins, making me shiver.
Goosebumps form across my skin.
Suddenly, a bright light catches my eye.
The rain, wind, thunder and lightning abruptly stop.
The clouds part, a beam of light shines through, like a glimmer of hope.
The sun is smiling down, freed from being caged for so long.
Nature was happy again.




Beautifully poeticized!flowerforyou

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Sat 03/12/11 04:24 PM
If only we all could be so naturally poetic in our thoughts and words,,excellent write man...drinker