I am so angry

I wish I could rip your insides out
Like you have mine.

I wish I could take away your hopes and dreams
Cause you have burned mine down to the ground.

Your lies were inserted in my viens and poisoned my whole body.
Do you see! Do you see!
How lies can take and destroy life!
Can you see! Can you see!
What you have done!

I am collapsed on the floor....
crying, screams, weaping, lamenting, mourning, grieving
But, you can't see. You don't see.

The pain...
The hurt....

You don't see my soul dying
My heart being crushed

You don't see. You can't see.

Tanya
12-2-10

heartfelt

Thanks for reading.

Beautifully (albeit painfully) done.

Having been there myself, the words carry enormous impact....

Well, I don't think you have quite been 'here' but I am sure most people can relate to the words.

Thanks for reading, sexy lexy!

Thanks for reading Eileen! (I was really having a 'moment' when I wrote it.)

As an English teacher, I will reserve my opinion.

Well, I didn't ask for opinions.

Not about being grammatically correct is it Tanya. You've done a good job of expressing your pain and that's what counts here.

Feel better sweet lady

Thank you Davey. How are things with you?

I wouldn't expect to be typing to words correctly while my tears were running and my mouth was sobbing.

very powerful Tanya

Thanks.

Not the sort of thing I'd be worrying about either.