Topic: Dark Horse
FearandLoathing's photo
Wed 11/24/10 01:02 PM
Edited by FearandLoathing on Wed 11/24/10 01:04 PM
Generations of torture, maiming the world,
Youth with rifles and water, recruiting the poor,
Life and death, in only one hand, the choice left,
Selection of the best, intelligence passed and violence kept,
Generation of Terminators, the Rambo's and Predator's,
Dead and gone the aggregator, passed over for another.

My hand will not cause this pain,
I will not hold this gun,
I leave you to your own game,
I am not going to be here when you are done.

The dark horse watches from the clouds,
As your life stitches the depths of the ground.

My hand will not cause this pain,
I will not hold this gun,
I leave you to your own game,
I am not going to be here when you are done.

The dark horse watches from the clouds,
As your life stitches the depths of the ground.

Useless really, figthing and destroying,
Speeding up the inevitable end painstakingly fast,
Apparently, I am not the only one that wants to watch it,
As you begin to chip away, watching the fragments drift,
Would you like a match? I ask, I think it would be easier,
You can watch it burn better, speed up the process a bit faster.

My hand will not cause this pain,
I will not hold this gun,
I leave you to your own game,
I am not going to be here when you are done,

I refuse to standby as you destroy,
My hand will not cause this pain.

Rhearabies's photo
Wed 11/24/10 01:17 PM
Really like it Fear. Especially the refrain. flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 11/24/10 02:04 PM
drinker

RowBaby's photo
Wed 11/24/10 02:12 PM
Really good Fear. The sense of violence in conveyed.

FearandLoathing's photo
Thu 11/25/10 05:25 PM
Thanks for the compliments everyone, much appreciated as always. I like the haunting repetition of the refrain, it goes well with the pre-chorus in this one.

Thanks again for the compliments.

Simonedemidova's photo
Thu 11/25/10 06:31 PM
nice job.

FearandLoathing's photo
Fri 11/26/10 06:04 PM
Thank you, Simone, glad you enjoyed it.

no photo
Fri 11/26/10 06:17 PM
As your hands shall not do, mine also shall hold to that true.

Great read man..drinker

DaveyB's photo
Sun 11/28/10 09:03 AM
Damn, I'd love to hear music behind this one! Well done.

FearandLoathing's photo
Sun 11/28/10 05:49 PM

Damn, I'd love to hear music behind this one! Well done.


Here is what I listened to when I wrote it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bBwa8nqtris

Thank you for the compliments, much appreciated as always.