Topic: "Broken Wings"
TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 06/29/07 12:31 PM
No longer can you fly.
No will to even try.
Once again you gave your heart.
To have it ripped apart.
Why should one even try?
It only leaves you alone to cry.
How much can one take?
Is love a big mistake?
Could it really be?
It was not meant for you and me.
I stand here all tattered and torn.
As I hold my head down to morn.
I ‘m left standing on the edge.
As I look out over the ledge.
Standing here my wing is broken.
So many words left unspoken.
They just seem to be hanging in the air.
As I stand here in complete despair.
Why could I not see?
You never really wanted me.
Was it all just a game?
A heart you wanted to claim.
To place upon your shelf.
And then leave me all by myself.
Standing here, wondering why.
Did you just want to see me cry?
As I stand here with a broken wing.
My heart no longer feels a thing.
You have made it go numb.
For now I have just become.
Nothing but and empty shell.
How long will it take?
For me to see it was all a mistake.
Why do some have the need?
To only mislead.
For now I stand here broken.
So many words left unspoken.




No I don't have a broken HEART. Actually was reading the comments of Cybear about wings being broken. Humm so yeah
Cybear this was due to your wordsflowerforyou

FriendsFirstKim's photo
Fri 06/29/07 01:36 PM
Okay see what happens when we read sad poems that someone else has written LOL....this happened to me yesterday....Nice job....I really enjoyed it. It is a keeper :)

no photo
Fri 06/29/07 01:46 PM
This is truly amazing my dear friend.And U wonder why I use that word when I think & speak of U.Ummm!because U are;=)It is if U temp.ran a parallel course with my mind and spoke the very words of my present feelings & state.Wow!So much left to ponder over here,& it reminds me of a Bruce Springsteen song when he says 1 step forward,2 steps back.I know the last thing we ever need in life is another gouge for then the fear factor raises while the trust level lowers.(sadly)Such surreal expression sweetheart.Then may our hearts remain guarded & may God guide us down the right path leading us to the right one who shall never hurt us again.An unconditional & mutually shared love between both.Amen! Thank You!Txs.my bearific friend always,Godspeed!Cybear.(((bear~hug)))
:smile: :tongue: flowerforyou :heart: blushing embarassed

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 06/29/07 02:10 PM
lol yes Kim and that is why I stated it was not I with the broken heart for I'm one that took your poem wrong indeed but I inquired bigsmile and was set straight from the man himself lol flowerforyou


Cybear, life takes each of us down a differt road but the feelings we each have it seems has a connection in the way it makes each of us feel. The heartache is felt by all some are differnt than others but still so very close. Any time we open our hearts and lay them out for all to see. Then if they are once again broken it feels as if a knife is being twisted. As we sit and try to figure out why. At times all we are doing is making the pain worse for some questions will never be answered but instead be left unspoken. But no mattter what happens we must push on. Don't build that wall so tall that no one and look over to see the person on the other side. For it is better to have loved than not to know love at all.bigsmile

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 07/16/07 08:48 PM
bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile

LAMom's photo
Mon 07/16/07 08:55 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh I so like this one,,, Bravo,,,

I think we have all felt this pain in our lives,,,
flowerforyou flowerforyou

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Tue 07/17/07 03:32 PM
Great my friends...

Cy see what an inspiration you nare my dear bearriffic friend!!!

Tx...girl, you just keep on surprising me with your talent, you've come a long way in the past year. It is so nice to see you expressing yourself so eloquently!!! Keep it up!

flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Tue 07/17/07 03:52 PM
Your writtings are so right on.I think we all have felt that,wondering if the pain will leave.It took along time for me to heal my broken wings.But life is so precious,it's time to look to the future.I really love reading your poems.flowerforyou flowerforyou

frankfk's photo
Tue 07/17/07 05:44 PM
TSX, broken wings have power to fly again too, i don't want to r-ray more here, as you clear it by the end of yourself :wink: flowerforyou