Topic: unrequited love
DALLASGH's photo
Sun 10/31/10 02:01 AM
unrequited or not quite
this love fullfills
the words not right
it's not complete
as love can be
and yet it feels
complete to me
i'de love to hold
the body tght
but at the moment
thats not right
this love evolved
from mental touch
and probably will
remain as such
for fate and time
have played their hand
and now we'll see
how love does stand.

kc0003's photo
Sun 10/31/10 02:04 AM
welcome...drinker

LilOlMeFromSD's photo
Sun 10/31/10 03:51 AM
Beautifully put, Dallas. It makes me think of how often someone has touched my heart through an email, an IM, or text message even though I may not have ever met them in person.

DALLASGH's photo
Sun 10/31/10 04:03 AM
FOR A LADY WHO SAYS SHE DOESN'T GET POETRY YOU EEM TO HAVE A NICE GRIP OF MINE.THANK YOU AGAIN I WILL TRY TO SHOW YOU SOME OTHER PIECES TO GET YOUR'E INPUT. D