Topic: enemy within.
DALLASGH's photo
Sat 10/30/10 08:32 PM
this is one of my own pieces written about 3 months ago.I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR REVIEWS

HOW DO YOU FIGHT THE ENEMY
THE ONE THAT IS WITHIN
THE ONE THAT KEEPS YOU SMOKING
OR STOPS YOU GETTING THIN
EVERY TIMEY OU FIGHT IT
IT JUST COMES BACK AGAIN
YOU KNOW THAT IF YOU LET IT
IT WILL CAUSE YOU PAIN
VOW AGAIN TO BEAT IT
TRY YOUR BEST TO CHANGE
REALLY HAVE TO CONCENTRATE
STILL YOU FIND IT STRANGE
SOME CHANGE OVERTAKES US
EFFORT NOT REQUIRED
OTHER CHANGE ELUDES US
JUST CANT BE AQUIRED
DOES THIS MEAN SURRENDER
SHOULD WE JUST GIVE IN
LET CHANGE THAT HAPPENS HAPPEN
LET THE ENEMY WIN
OR SHOULD WE JUST KEEP FIGHTING
BATTLE TO THE LAST
JUST TO STOP THE ENEMY
HOLDING US TO OUR PAST

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Sat 10/30/10 08:40 PM
whoa Why are you yelling at us? tears

DALLASGH's photo
Sat 10/30/10 08:44 PM
YELLING???
THESESWORDS ARE WHISPERED TO THE SOUL>

markc48's photo
Sat 10/30/10 08:53 PM
All caps is considered yelling.

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Sat 10/30/10 08:55 PM
Shhhhh!you have your Caps Lock engaged on your keyboard the entire time.That is considered yelling not only within this sacred forum but throughout the entire site.Godspeed!Cy :smile: