Topic: Yours
Sharris's photo
Wed 10/27/10 08:18 PM
Edited by Sharris on Wed 10/27/10 08:19 PM
Yours

Deeply in retrospect
thoughts woven
to caress.

Bare embodied
lace reveals
beating heart
where touch conceals.

Hold to quiet
feel to quell
waves confess
oceans swell.

Stirring embers
still retains
Spice of heat
your kiss remains.

SadieLu 2010

EvanBa's photo
Thu 10/28/10 07:26 AM
Another nice write Sharris. I think I am beginning to like your style. I am one that does like at least some modicum of form in a poem and you do it well. Nice soft sensual write here, kudos,

Evan

Sharris's photo
Thu 10/28/10 01:29 PM

Another nice write Sharris. I think I am beginning to like your style. I am one that does like at least some modicum of form in a poem and you do it well. Nice soft sensual write here, kudos,

Evan

Thank you, Evan.

LAMom's photo
Mon 11/01/10 08:19 PM
Oh beautiful you
:heart: