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Edited by
Sharris
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Wed 10/27/10 08:19 PM
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Yours
Deeply in retrospect thoughts woven to caress. Bare embodied lace reveals beating heart where touch conceals. Hold to quiet feel to quell waves confess oceans swell. Stirring embers still retains Spice of heat your kiss remains. SadieLu 2010 |
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Another nice write Sharris. I think I am beginning to like your style. I am one that does like at least some modicum of form in a poem and you do it well. Nice soft sensual write here, kudos,
Evan |
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Another nice write Sharris. I think I am beginning to like your style. I am one that does like at least some modicum of form in a poem and you do it well. Nice soft sensual write here, kudos, Evan Thank you, Evan. |
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Oh beautiful you
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