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"living in your memory"
Five long years ago lives were shattered, hopes and dreams replaced my mourning and pain. for some life lost all meaning, we lived each day as if we were programmed to do so, our minds and hearts filled to the brim with days we would never again have with you, laughs we will never again share. After several years i saw something through the tears and pain for the first time, this was not the way you would've wanted things to be. you were always so happy and full of love which you showered upon my cousins and i constantly, making us feel as if the world could be ours. looking out into the darkness of night i wondered what you thought, sitting up there watching your daughters and neice struggling to keep their heads above water. anger surged through me like a bolt of electricity. how could we do this? you didn't leave us by choice it was probably tearing you apart watching over us. it was at that very moment i smiled through the steadily falling tears, looked out into the starry summer night and softly promised you one way or the other we'd be alright, we would live each day in your memory until at last we are together again... this poem is a dedication to Dion Parish the greatest uncle and father who ever lived. he was there when no one else seemed to care, the only one i ever admired, respected and loved as if he were my own father. he is greatly missed by all who knew him |
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Honey thats beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! I, and I know others on this site could
replace the name with our loved ones!!!! Bravo to you!!!! |
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This is a very beautiful dedication S~P.Extremely deep & heartfelt.Rest
assured that ur uncle is looking down at U & smileing.He can feel & sense every word that U have spoken about him.And I am equally certain that for every tear that U have shed for him,he would rather have each 1 replaced with a smile.I am sure that we would prefer that U are happy for each & every day that U remain upon the earth.He is very proud of U indeed.Absolutely superp S~P.;=)((bear~hug))Godspeed!Cybear ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ p.s.C+P this dedication into the Poem sect.sweetheart. |
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