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Topic: ~ undone
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 08/04/10 07:56 AM
sometimes I come undone and the blanket folds up by itself taking warmth away and the sun can't climb out of the test tube sometimes I come undone and all the pages have one word and my dreams are stuck on a bridge under a honeycomb moon sometimes I come undone and silence spills from my closed throat and this hazy ardor roams an unsatisfied desert and the thin paper mache' mask cracks and I come undone

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 08/04/10 08:00 AM
sometimes i am whole.... mostly not though.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Wed 08/04/10 08:16 AM
very nice

earthytaurus76 Joined Wed 04/08/09 Posts: 6603	Wed 08/04/10 08:17 AM
I like it.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 08/04/10 11:24 AM
kc.....sometimes...I can smell the raindrops and I lose my breath a teasing mess smile pkd1220....earthytaurus76...thankyou very much... teasingbrunette

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Wed 08/04/10 11:54 AM
sometimes I come undone and the blanket folds up by itself taking warmth away and the sun can't climb out of the test tube sometimes I come undone and all the pages have one word and my dreams are stuck on a bridge under a honeycomb moon sometimes I come undone and silence spills from my closed throat and this hazy ardor roams an unsatisfied desert and the thin paper mache' mask cracks and I come undone Revealing an inner beautiful you, good write.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 08/04/10 01:09 PM
BonnyMiss...thankyou for the charming comment.

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