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Topic: My relationship elevator
isaac_dede Joined Sat 11/24/07 Posts: 10632	Tue 06/29/10 11:55 AM
It’s still serves it purpose travelling up and down Carrying passengers from the roof to the ground But the lighted buttons are fading one by one And the music is dying, and soon will be none The reflections are dimming in the mirrored walls While it will last a while longer, I’m afraid it may fall

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 06/29/10 12:05 PM


OKCUTIE67 Joined Fri 04/02/10 Posts: 2118	Tue 06/29/10 12:18 PM
Excellent!!

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Tue 06/29/10 02:04 PM
I know how you feel! Good write!

isaac_dede Joined Sat 11/24/07 Posts: 10632	Tue 06/29/10 02:52 PM
thank you (((2kidsmom))) (((okcutie67))) (((Mystique42)))

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Tue 06/29/10 06:14 PM


s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Wed 06/30/10 01:44 AM
inspired Root Cellar

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