Topic: Would love some feedback
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Wed 06/09/10 11:02 AM
I'm pretty new to the whole "dating site" thing, and have been working on my profile a little. Was just wondering if anyone has some suggestions, whether it be take something out or add more to it.

Thanks in advance!

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Wed 06/09/10 11:31 AM
Not bad at all. Good assortment of pics, good summary about yourself, although I would prefer to see a little more background info, history, more about what exactly you're looking for, etc. -- more detail, basically. But my profile is 1400 pages long, so I may be a little biased in that direction.

There may be some who will tell you that a couple of the sentences toward the end come across as a little harsh and cynical -- me, personally, I love that stuff, and I would advise you to leave it in there. Rather see something a little edgy as opposed to "I like long walks on the beach" or something similarly vapid and pointless.