A girl walks up to me
and i tell her
her zipper
is up


she walks up to me


first off
this doesn't happen
to me too often


more rather seldom
i would not just walk away
as if
she tells me something
i cant remember
to forge
or conjure
up a reply
with

besides
more than the wink
of an eye
with a click click


so i slide


down the pool ladder
face first with a zinger

"Hey!! your zipper is up!!"

she laughs
ironically
cute for a
not so cute
girl

i throw out another ZINGER

she nibbles
sighs yawns whatever

time stops

two minutes later
she is bringing me over a frosty mug
dripping with sarcasm

the tainted smile sign
as she leans like the neck of a crane
i mischeviously notice her white teeth
and
open zipper

and of course
her nipples


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I honestly don't think I know what this is about, but I like it and I think it's very well written. Kudos.

i made it ^ about a guy who tells a girl a cheesy line thinking he cant get no play anyway and than she hits on him suprising him.

cute read

Bravo D! I really like this one....please keep them coming....I've missed being around to read you