Topic: really i posted this it sucks
williambishop's photo
Tue 06/01/10 08:44 AM
Finding ways for myself ,to be needed and desired.
Unjust and un-needed is the trick to be played.
Yet my mind is fodder.
Stuck in the limelight, ever so bright.
To be hated and despised by the sheeples might.
The times have changed, and they are here.
Trust the truth, go ahead be a slooth.
When the wisdom is shed, it will put you to bed!
I've taken my red pill, for my desires killed.
Your imaginative views and possibilities to be.
The one true person your meant to be.

Seakolony's photo
Tue 06/01/10 08:48 AM

Finding ways for myself ,to be needed and desired.
Unjust and un-needed is the trick to be played.
Yet my mind is fodder.
Stuck in the limelight, ever so bright.
To be hated and despised by the sheeples might.
The times have changed, and they are here.
Trust the truth, go ahead be a slooth.
When the wisdom is shed, it will put you to bed!
I've taken my red pill, for my desires killed.
Your imaginative views and possibilities to be.
The one true person your meant to be.

Nothing we do ever sucks.......it is all a part of us.....call it works in progress........propel and keep your positives,even if containing negatives......

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Tue 06/01/10 08:51 AM
flowers

williambishop's photo
Tue 06/01/10 08:54 AM
i believe my "poems" have messages to subliminally awaken the people
i titled it bad so people would read everytone wants to be a critic thanks for the reply

Seakolony's photo
Tue 06/01/10 08:59 AM

i believe my "poems" have messages to subliminally awaken the people
i titled it bad so people would read everytone wants to be a critic thanks for the reply


Although I am going to ask just to be sure I read it the way it was meant? Slooth? Sleuth or sloth? I think it is sleuth, but wanted to make sure?

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Tue 06/01/10 09:01 AM
sleuth like a detective i wrote that like 10 mins ago i type fast expect typos

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Tue 06/01/10 04:07 PM

i believe my "poems" have messages to subliminally awaken the people
i titled it bad so people would read everyone wants to be a critic thanks for the reply

Whenever you POST in a public forum, EXPECT CRITICISM!

Other-rise, YOUR just typing to yourself..:wink:

And illusive titles do get many who wonder,,,,WTH?,,lol drinker