Topic: R.I.P
Queene123's photo
Sat 05/15/10 12:14 AM
i wrote this poem on the california teens





the horror of life
as where the system
had failed upon many around
as waiting in the rain and a ride
yet to come, instead
shows up a mountain lion
whose instinks are to stalk and attack
opportunities on trying to escape dont
accomplish your where abouts
as listening to the law where we stand
wishing that lion would soon to die
and listening to the statement what
the medical advisor has to say
being buried with no hope of survival
is so gloomy as its not what was wanted
on how to die

RobinSmile's photo
Sat 05/15/10 01:48 AM
i like your work alot!u should message me... i would to hear more and let you read some of my writting.