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Topic: Above the shoulders.
iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 05/14/10 01:02 PM
As you read this, I know I am on your mind, see this is where I stay, for you to find. Sometimes I might cross to the other side, lay down low, and try to hide. Then I POP-IN, as to yourself, you confide. No big miricle at work here to feel. Its just the begining of something real. You see, when I am on your mind. I can touch your heart. This is the path, for love to start. So let me cross your mind, from time to time, as you read this well placed rhyme.

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FearandLoathing Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 30121	Fri 05/14/10 01:53 PM
Nice flow, pretty smooth from line to line. Great write, friend, keep it up.

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Fri 05/14/10 06:37 PM


delilady Joined Fri 07/24/09 Posts: 23825	Fri 05/14/10 06:39 PM
Nice Terry! And I love the sweet pic you have!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 05/15/10 09:46 PM
Nice Terry! And I love the sweet pic you have! thanks for your kind words...

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 05/15/10 09:55 PM
Nice flow, pretty smooth from line to line. Great write, friend, keep it up. Thanks man,,

zanne46 Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5610	Sat 05/15/10 10:11 PM
Love you my bestest friend...great write..xoxoxo

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 05/16/10 06:18 PM
Love you my bestest friend...great write..xoxoxo Thanks Suz,,,,FRIENDS just bring out the best that we can be

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