Topic: Our Crossing.
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Mon 04/26/10 03:06 PM
As I crossed your mind today,

Did you stop me and ask me to stay?

Were you watching me, in the pictures of your mind.

Was I smiling and singing to all mankind?

Could you read my thoughts, and help me untie some knots?

You see, I to had you cross my mind today.

And when you went by, I jumped in your way.

You smiled so big, and gave me an embrace.

We were so close, as I stared at your beautiful face.

I lend in toward you, as you softly closed your eyes.

We fell into a kiss, under aqua deep blue skies.

Slowly pulling apart, eyes opening, to see each reflections.

And we stared so deeply into our souls, imaginations.

As I crossed your mind today.

I was hoping you felt this also, along your way.:heart:








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Mon 04/26/10 04:49 PM
flowerforyou :heart: I thought,,maybe I did??:cry: frustrated





:wink: laugh

dnc4Him's photo
Mon 04/26/10 08:34 PM
very lucky ladyflowerforyou

zanne46's photo
Mon 04/26/10 09:57 PM
Very nice write Terry....xoxoxo

Tessa02's photo
Mon 04/26/10 11:16 PM
Actually you did cross my mind today!! Thought of you traveling & wondering if you were having to drive through rain or sunny skies!!! Nice write!!!

Queene123's photo
Tue 04/27/10 01:00 AM

As I crossed your mind today,

Did you stop me and ask me to stay?

Were you watching me, in the pictures of your mind.

Was I smiling and singing to all mankind?

Could you read my thoughts, and help me untie some knots?

You see, I to had you cross my mind today.

And when you went by, I jumped in your way.

You smiled so big, and gave me an embrace.

We were so close, as I stared at your beautiful face.

I lend in toward you, as you softly closed your eyes.

We fell into a kiss, under aqua deep blue skies.

Slowly pulling apart, eyes opening, to see each reflections.

And we stared so deeply into our souls, imaginations.

As I crossed your mind today.

I was hoping you felt this also, along your way.:heart:











i added to your poem


did you stop and think
where you have been heading
as feeling lost and confused
and in such a crazy daze
as you tend to dream big
which nothing is wrong with that
as you pull apart and wonder away
thinking what to do and see whats
upon next in line
as you soul is crossing differnt paths
and a new journey is about to rise
as your smile sings so loud with glee
as i want to embrace you with
all my might
as i close my eyes i see a dance that had once been
so open and so deep. as watching you through a stain glass
full of beautiful colors bright and strong

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Tue 04/27/10 02:23 AM
that would be even better with music, as it is it made me :cry:

kdough's photo
Tue 04/27/10 05:25 AM
:heart: flowerforyou Yes T you cross my MIND quite OFTEN....:heart:

LightVoice's photo
Tue 04/27/10 10:05 AM
flowerforyou :heart: Sweet, clever, ,playful.. a very fun read!

My favorite lines;

As I crossed your mind today, Did you stop me and ask me to stay?

You see, I to had you cross my mind today. And when you went by, I jumped in your way.


flowers

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Tue 04/27/10 11:14 AM

flowerforyou :heart: Sweet, clever, ,playful.. a very fun read!

My favorite lines;

As I crossed your mind today, Did you stop me and ask me to stay?

You see, I to had you cross my mind today. And when you went by, I jumped in your way.


flowers




adding more


as i crossed your mind
i hope you would stay
and write a line or two
and pray not in the wrongful way
as be yourself
the sweet and playful child
we had known you once had been
as your in my mind today
can you come out and play
as i jump to the sky if one can
and have you watch
what is wrong and what is right
im playing the field i think
with one emotions. which i
know is wrong
as a gentle kiss and a patt on the back
should only be enough.
as the heart has been broken to much as you know
someone can be lucky in the eye to settle down
with no issue at that

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Tue 04/27/10 11:20 AM
Sweetflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 04/28/10 06:44 PM

flowerforyou :heart: Sweet, clever, ,playful.. a very fun read!

My favorite lines;

As I crossed your mind today, Did you stop me and ask me to stay?

You see, I to had you cross my mind today. And when you went by, I jumped in your way.


flowers

Thank you LV,,and its all about the new Summer!!!:heart:

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Thu 04/29/10 01:58 PM
Edited by iam4u on Thu 04/29/10 01:59 PM

that would be even better with music, as it is it made me :cry:
Mano,,THATS about the nicest compliment I think I have ever received from another man...Thank you....drinker

And NO,,,WE'RE NOT GOING OUT!!!laugh laugh laugh laugh


Thats my real,,and my humor....laugh But really,,If it made YOUR eyes red,,,then my WORDS,,,hit the real meaning of their actions.
To MAKE folks,,,FEEL....drinker

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Thu 04/29/10 02:24 PM
And NO,,,WE'RE NOT GOING OUT!!!
:cry:

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Thu 04/29/10 02:42 PM
Very heartwarming, Terry!flowerforyou :heart:

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Sun 05/02/10 07:05 PM

Very heartwarming, Terry!flowerforyou :heart:
flowerforyou :heart: Thanks very much for reading,,,wink,