Topic: I Ask For You
bamtino's photo
Fri 04/23/10 02:34 AM
I Ask For You

As sure as the stars will shine,
When the sky becomes dark
My heart will sing a lonely song,
As my tears follow along

And I ask for you

As sure as water will flow,
To the lowest point
I live in fear,
Because your not here

And I ask for you

As sure as the winds will blow
Those seeds of hope
My spirit will fly
With you near bye

And I ask for you

As sure as time will pass
My body will age
I hope to know your name
Will you do the same

And I ask for you

When I finally rest
As I look to the sky
No longer do I run
Nor do I cry

When I ask for you

MAD 2010

Tessa02's photo
Fri 04/23/10 06:20 AM
Very awesome!!! Enjoyed the read!!:smile:

no photo
Sat 04/24/10 01:22 PM
drinker :heart: :wink: NICE write and heart felt,,

bamtino's photo
Mon 04/26/10 02:45 AM
Thank-you

LightVoice's photo
Mon 04/26/10 11:35 AM
oh wow! beautiful flowerforyou so tender.. so raw... so sweet:heart:

Queene123's photo
Tue 04/27/10 09:47 AM

I Ask For You

As sure as the stars will shine,
When the sky becomes dark
My heart will sing a lonely song,
As my tears follow along

And I ask for you

As sure as water will flow,
To the lowest point
I live in fear,
Because your not here

And I ask for you

As sure as the winds will blow
Those seeds of hope
My spirit will fly
With you near bye

And I ask for you

As sure as time will pass
My body will age
I hope to know your name
Will you do the same

And I ask for you

When I finally rest
As I look to the sky
No longer do I run
Nor do I cry

When I ask for you

MAD 2010



adding to your poem


a tear runs down your face
is it the rain or actually a cry
as some will hide there inner feelings
for not wanting to show there real pain
as i look upon the stars and make a wish
that one day would be true
as i dont live in fear. no need to at that
the winds blow crazy around. a storm is
coming and ground is shaking
be steady and dont run in fear
be patent as your spirit will
come and bring your guide to you
as watching the sun shine through the clouds
and more visits from your ancesters
are a wonderful gift at that
as i ask for you to be patient. for this is never
really the end

bamtino's photo
Fri 05/07/10 01:06 PM
Thank-you all, Sorry to bombard everyone with my writes, but for some reason I have had a lot of trouble getting on the site,,,
Michael