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Topic: Intrepid days
wm_55 Joined Sat 03/13/10 Posts: 43	Fri 04/16/10 03:49 PM
In those days when all thoughts are just misgivings. When not one challenge has been met nor one foe vanquished. With your will spent and your heart drained of all its strength and there is nothing left to give, you succumb. It is in those sincere moments of giving in and giving up that truth and faith are found. It is at that serene moment of ultimate surrender that we meet our true selves and God.

Ladylid2012 Joined Sun 07/05/09 Posts: 42269	Fri 04/16/10 04:23 PM
I like the way you write

wm_55 Joined Sat 03/13/10 Posts: 43	Fri 04/16/10 06:40 PM
I like the way you write Thanks, I wrote this the day I was standing in the rain, under the old preverbal oak tree, with a 100 ft. extension cord on hand. The rain cloaked my tears as I contemplated the end of my existence. In the end I reasoned it all out and chose to go on, despite the pain. I made the right decision:) It all seems so stupid now, lol. Bill

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Fri 04/16/10 06:58 PM
you have expressed well. Easily understood, your voice, your verse.

wm_55 Joined Sat 03/13/10 Posts: 43	Sun 04/18/10 11:34 AM
you have expressed well. Easily understood, your voice, your verse. Thank you:)

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