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Topic: my song downloaded to gmail
heavenlyboy34 Joined Fri 07/04/08 Posts: 17348	Sat 04/10/10 05:57 PM
The guitar solos are poorly tuned. Some study of harmony and meoldy can remedy this. I suggest using higher-pitched voicings(inversions) for the chords and have a bass player take care of the low frequency and fill in the harmony. The vocal line is pretty well in tune and has a quality timbre, but shaky at spots.

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Sat 04/10/10 06:06 PM
The guitar solos are poorly tuned. Some study of harmony and meoldy can remedy this. I suggest using higher-pitched voicings(inversions) for the chords and have a bass player take care of the low frequency and fill in the harmony. The vocal line is pretty well in tune and has a quality timbre, but shaky at spots. like i said...its just me...its meant as a simple recording not cd quality...i am a rythm guitarist not a lead..i can do simple little lead things but the point of this was to show my fellow minglers what i can do....alot of people talk a lot of bs on here...you know i can do this or that etc etc...just a quick recording to back myself up....lol.....its all good thank you for the opine.. i always listen to critasism in hopes of improving....i imagine once i get use to this 8 track i will get better...im a work in progress

buttons Joined Mon 11/06/06 Posts: 25783	Sat 04/10/10 06:14 PM
omg lol im dumb on these things... i see something.. dont know how to work it... at least i remembered to turn on my sound lot of good that does when i dont know how to hear it... <<<<old school i need a "play " button>>>

redhead44613 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 12976	Sat 04/10/10 06:29 PM
Make a cd! I soo want one! I remember when you sang to me...I miss that.

Sneaksintoyourheart Joined Fri 10/16/09 Posts: 19261	Sat 04/10/10 06:33 PM
all i gotta say again is wow good job i just listened an glad i did (((((((JEFF)))))

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Sat 04/10/10 07:02 PM
omg lol im dumb on these things... i see something.. dont know how to work it... at least i remembered to turn on my sound lot of good that does when i dont know how to hear it... <<<<old school i need a "play " button>>> hit download...lol

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Sat 04/10/10 07:05 PM
Make a cd! I soo want one! I remember when you sang to me...I miss that. ok sweety...i will record some more songs and send ya one

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Sat 04/10/10 07:08 PM
all i gotta say again is wow good job i just listened an glad i did (((((((JEFF))))) thank you kerry

Sneaksintoyourheart Joined Fri 10/16/09 Posts: 19261	Sat 04/10/10 07:08 PM
all i gotta say again is wow good job i just listened an glad i did (((((((JEFF))))) thank you kerry yw if u make a cd i will take one too please

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Sat 04/10/10 07:11 PM
all i gotta say again is wow good job i just listened an glad i did (((((((JEFF))))) thank you kerry yw if u make a cd i will take one too please no prob...hun.

markecephus Joined Sun 10/07/07 Posts: 13831	Sat 04/10/10 07:23 PM
My band and i just called it a night. After a nice eight hour jam. And yep,we cover that song. Nice job, Jeff! On another note, i think today, after a long time waiting, we have found two singers, to complete us. Basically, we covered everything from Allison Crouse, (or is it Kraus?) to Black sabbath. This is a highly versatile band, covering blues, country, rock and metal. We do have some work ahead of us, as far as recording, we are working on that, and as soon as i get it right, i will upload a video. It has taken a long time, and been through several bands, with a lot of disappointments along the way, a lot of wasted hours, weeks, months, and years..but we were on today, to the max. My guys rock! and so do you! Hope to bring something to the table soon.

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Sat 04/10/10 07:29 PM
My band and i just called it a night. After a nice eight hour jam. And yep,we cover that song. Nice job, Jeff! On another note, i think today, after a long time waiting, we have found two singers, to complete us. Basically, we covered everything from Allison Crouse, (or is it Kraus?) to Black sabbath. This is a highly versatile band, covering blues, country, rock and metal. We do have some work ahead of us, as far as recording, we are working on that, and as soon as i get it right, i will upload a video. It has taken a long time, and been through several bands, with a lot of disappointments along the way, a lot of wasted hours, weeks, months, and years..but we were on today, to the max. My guys rock! and so do you! Hope to bring something to the table soon. thank you mark...im just a personal player myself but i know what you mean..ive played with others many times and sometime i dont think we could hit a sour note if we tried and other times eh.....nice to converse with fellow musicians and thank you for your support....