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I've tasted your rusted metalic sting,
I've written you poems and words to sing. We're all alone just you and I, I close my eyes, prepared to fly. My stress relief and closest one, They don't approve the things we've done. We turn away and laugh at them, They don't understand my closest friend. Just one more time, my shining friend, Away from home, 'round another bend, Just one more time for you and me, Goodnight to all and blessed be. We've been together through thick and thin, Through blessed joy and wicked sin. It is so fitting my dear dear friend, That its only us, in the end. |
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Dig it - great write.
"We've been together through thick and thin, Through blessed joy and wicked sin." I especially liked that part. Well done and cheers. |
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I've tasted your rusted metalic sting, I've written you poems and words to sing. We're all alone just you and I, I close my eyes, prepared to fly. My stress relief and closest one, They don't approve the things we've done. We turn away and laugh at them, They don't understand my closest friend. Just one more time, my shining friend, Away from home, 'round another bend, Just one more time for you and me, Goodnight to all and blessed be. We've been together through thick and thin, Through blessed joy and wicked sin. It is so fitting my dear dear friend, That its only us, in the end. |
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Awesome write.
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thank you guys
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hi spiro!
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hello dear, how have you been?
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i'm good
enjoyed it as always... |
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A little dark.... but my stuff usually is.
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Black is good.
Ain't all seashells and orchids yanno... (((Spiro))) |
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I've tasted your rusted metalic sting, I've written you poems and words to sing. We're all alone just you and I, I close my eyes, prepared to fly. My stress relief and closest one, They don't approve the things we've done. We turn away and laugh at them, They don't understand my closest friend. Just one more time, my shining friend, Away from home, 'round another bend, Just one more time for you and me, Goodnight to all and blessed be. We've been together through thick and thin, Through blessed joy and wicked sin. It is so fitting my dear dear friend, That its only us, in the end. I close my eyes, prepared to fly. For with this pistol, I shall die!!!! This was a great write and from the heart,,,thanks for sharing. |
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Pistols are too messy...... my dearest friend is much more elegant than that.
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