Topic: My suicide.....my perspective
Gossipmpm's photo
Tue 03/30/10 06:49 AM
I have felt
the razors edge

the sharp
mettalic scratch

the burn


I watched as the blood
dripped to the floor
forming a puddle
of despair

And I wiggled my toes in it

laughing

reaching for the stars

in a daze

wondering if it was all worth it
if it mattered at all

and as my head
floated from my body

as my soul took flight

I decided to stay


I listened as the sirens
swirled around me

felt every stich in my wrists

and as I landed once again

I said thank you

to the angels

I met

along the way






Tammy:heart:


no photo
Tue 03/30/10 08:47 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

bastet126's photo
Tue 03/30/10 08:53 AM
a nice perspective on a hard subject flowerforyou

Gossipmpm's photo
Thu 04/01/10 05:49 AM
Thanks!:heart:

dnc4Him's photo
Thu 04/01/10 07:24 AM
very glad you came back!

no photo
Thu 04/01/10 07:39 AM
You are very talented very sad poem & such a beautiful write.

skydancingA's photo
Thu 04/01/10 07:46 AM

I have felt
the razors edge
the sharp
mettalic scratch
the burn
I watched as the blood
dripped to the floor
forming a puddle
of despair
And I wiggled my toes in it
laughing
reaching for the stars
in a daze
wondering if it was all worth it
if it mattered at all
and as my head
floated from my body
as my soul took flight
I decided to stay
I listened as the sirens
swirled around me
felt every stich in my wrists
and as I landed once again
I said thank you
to the angels
I met
along the way

Tammy:heart:


You took us there..
:heart: You rock gf :heart:

no photo
Thu 04/01/10 08:21 AM
Into YOUR light,,your shadows stay dark, but also very deep.
The brightness of this woman you are now.
Shines past any sorrows, and any distances to feel your LOVE...

YOU ARE MY LIGHT, to HELP ME SEE..Thank You for being my Friend and my writer buddy who always shares a smile and hug...Lov ya girl!!
flowerforyou :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

MzEm's photo
Thu 04/01/10 09:10 AM
Wow Miss Tammy, you did good! I like this....

no photo
Thu 04/01/10 06:19 PM
nice..I too am glad you changed your mind :heart:

Gossipmpm's photo
Fri 04/02/10 06:19 PM
Thank you everyone! :heart: