Topic: --- Everything ---
HawaiiMusikMan's photo
Fri 03/26/10 11:29 PM

I saw you sitting in the bushes
Reading a book, with no place to call home
I saw you boastful and arrogant
Parading around town

I saw you striving to make things work
With worry in your eyes
I saw you laughing and dancing
Enjoying friends and the pleasures of life

I saw you planning and scheming
Behind closed curtains, our demise
I saw the loving gaze to your baby
As you kissed her head goodnight

I saw you crying in sorrow
Trying to forgive yourself your wrongs
I saw you making the best of what little you have
Still with hope in your heart

I saw you give another piece of yourself
Hoping they won't only take
I saw you change your outward appearance
Trying to find your place


I even saw you in the mirror
And when I closed my eyes to dream
One mind and one soul
Don't you know?
We're everything

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Fri 03/26/10 11:32 PM
flowerforyou

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Fri 03/26/10 11:45 PM
VERY reflective in thoughts man,,,COOL,,,drinker drinker

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Sat 03/27/10 12:36 AM
Wow, that's really awesome. flowerforyou

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Sat 03/27/10 01:37 AM
hi ,,,,,i m very alone in darknes plz give me some light

HawaiiMusikMan's photo
Sat 03/27/10 03:36 AM

hi ,,,,,i m very alone in darknes plz give me some light


I think that if you find yourself truly seeking the light that it's already found you. It's not something I can give

bastet126's photo
Sat 03/27/10 06:18 AM
very moving flowerforyou

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Sat 03/27/10 06:27 AM
heartfelt and insightful-very nice

MzEm's photo
Wed 03/31/10 07:56 AM
Nicely done....

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Wed 03/31/10 09:04 AM
very much enjoyed, heartfelt