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iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 03/15/10 12:47 PM
I've been Kicked, I've been tricked, I've even been Flicked. Been over-rated, been constipated, yes manipulated, and even hated. Sure I've been told I was loved, but then She gave ME a shove. Life is grand, till you give-um back their gold band. I don't live on-it, just with-it, looking for one more, who IS IT! To show me kind, to move my mind, to her, I only dream to find. I hate to yell, or be told to go to hell. Relaxed moments, relaxed romance, relaxed in or out of my pants. Don't want drama, don't need that trauma, Just to be me and have YOU see and want ME. Life is to short to live-it in fear. I want you to ALWAYS want me NEAR. This ain't about hassles, nor about asss-holes. This is all about Living and loving through our giving.. Can YOU be for me, can I be for YOU? Only to know each other, shall WE SHOW EACH OTHER WHO'S TRUE!

LeighAnna9 Joined Sun 08/16/09 Posts: 5638	Mon 03/15/10 12:55 PM
What a great write, here's hoping you find her and soon!!!

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 03/15/10 01:43 PM
I love it!! Great job babes!

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 03/15/10 02:44 PM
(((T)))

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 03/15/10 05:23 PM
i hope true finds you some day!

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Mon 03/15/10 05:45 PM


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jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Tue 03/16/10 06:52 AM
drama, don't need that trauma liked that line bro great write

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Tue 03/16/10 09:20 AM
Good job! I like this one a lot.

vikrnle Joined Wed 01/27/10 Posts: 493	Tue 03/16/10 09:36 AM
I've been Kicked, I've been tricked, I've even been Flicked. Been over-rated, been constipated, yes manipulated, and even hated. Sure I've been told I was loved, but then She gave ME a shove. Life is grand, till you give-um back their gold band. I don't live on-it, just with-it, looking for one more, who IS IT! To show me kind, to move my mind, to her, I only dream to find. I hate to yell, or be told to go to hell. Relaxed moments, relaxed romance, relaxed in or out of my pants. Don't want drama, don't need that trauma, Just to be me and have YOU see and want ME. Life is to short to live-it in fear. I want you to ALWAYS want me NEAR. This ain't about hassles, nor about asss-holes. This is all about Living and loving through our giving.. Can YOU be for me, can I be for YOU? Only to know each other, shall WE SHOW EACH OTHER WHO'S TRUE! I really enjoy your poems they run freakin deep down in your soul for you to write them you had to go through a lot of life experiences. Thanks for sharing looking forward to reading more from you.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/16/10 05:28 PM
What a great write, here's hoping you find her and soon!!! To be REAL here,,Leighanna,,there is probably MANY out here who could be my lady,,and BE ALL THAT with me.. So I know I have NO-ONE picked in my mind for me to falsely see or THINK to GREAT OF,,its just SO-many want to just TALK lightly,,and not act or be ALL THAT,,so I write and wait for the one who REALLY turns her head and see me,,,wink,AND THAT,,,has happen a couple of times,,but those failed as to long term...so Life is LIVING and love is a roll of the dice,,,maybe,,maybe not.. ITS only found through BEING or DOING life with each other in SOME FORM,,before you BOTH can digest each others WHOLE person to KNOW.. Thanks for your nice words,,,

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/16/10 05:28 PM
drama, don't need that trauma liked that line bro great write Peace and REAl Jimmy,,THANKS man...

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/16/10 05:40 PM
I've been Kicked, I've been tricked, I've even been Flicked. Been over-rated, been constipated, yes manipulated, and even hated. Sure I've been told I was loved, but then She gave ME a shove. Life is grand, till you give-um back their gold band. I don't live on-it, just with-it, looking for one more, who IS IT! To show me kind, to move my mind, to her, I only dream to find. I hate to yell, or be told to go to hell. Relaxed moments, relaxed romance, relaxed in or out of my pants. Don't want drama, don't need that trauma, Just to be me and have YOU see and want ME. Life is to short to live-it in fear. I want you to ALWAYS want me NEAR. This ain't about hassles, nor about asss-holes. This is all about Living and loving through our giving.. Can YOU be for me, can I be for YOU? Only to know each other, shall WE SHOW EACH OTHER WHO'S TRUE! I really enjoy your poems they run freakin deep down in your soul for you to write them you had to go through a lot of life experiences. Thanks for sharing looking forward to reading more from you. Thank you Vikrnle, Your words touch my heart as YOU read MY HEART,,,so thats very cool,,I am deep when dealing with any passions for or to,,,and IF you read me as deep,,then it was to my core,,,as I only TRY to write and make others feel me....YOU DID.. Thanks and be safe,,,,

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/16/10 05:41 PM
Good job! I like this one a lot. Thank you so,Mz Em,,I am very glad ya liked it and if it touched your heart,,,it is COOl,,

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/16/10 05:42 PM
I love it!! Great job babes! Ahhh,Thanks Val,,,Your always so SWEET,,hugs..

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/16/10 05:45 PM
(((T))) ((((((((((((((((MY MISS T)))))))))))))))))))) Thank you MUCH Teddybear,,,,,I hope life has YOU with smiles, Be Blessed..

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/16/10 05:47 PM
i hope true finds you some day! WELL,,I don't know about TRUE LOVE,,but I do HOPE,,she would at least be TRUE,,,wink,Thanks bastet,,

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/16/10 05:48 PM
Thank you very much Karen,,,THEY SMELL GREAT!!!!

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iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/16/10 05:49 PM
I'll see your and raise ya more... Thanks Ainjel,,