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Edited by
jimz
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Thu 03/11/10 10:56 PM
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i am looking up from the sky
i am writing on a piece of cardboard a three letter poem shoes are peeling i found them dumpster diving with my friend ron they only had a little smell what i had on were worse on the shoes i found the rubber is like a mouth on the bottom of the shoe but i did not smell i said a silent prayer to jesus that the blisters would heal ron is on his second forty ouncer and it is 10:30 in the morning i try to wait till after the can run to drink buzzed, pushing a shopping cart down a alley digging in the trash when fine chicks in bikinis are walking by and surfer dudes and i got this big head of hair and a holy t shirt and fuucked up jeans thats all i could say about my pants i did not find good pants in the trash when i got desperate i stole goodwill bags late at night i wanted to be a nice dressed bum |
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very moving Jimmy
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Life is sad, and very cruel,, nice write,,
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the brutality of our world, is often times, the most poetic
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Sad reality in this write (((Jimmy)))
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