Topic: Pastela
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Wed 03/10/10 08:29 PM
Edited by plastic_pancakes on Wed 03/10/10 08:33 PM
Then at night as grim light spoke through open wires;
the trim gate paired the night away with flares
and wild, white rains posing as a squire -
brief as the torrent, swallowed as if air
pushed gently reeling on the throat...
swollen still, like tongues rung out from rhyme;
and as the shiver shook the shameful coat
across the belly swelled with lime

And emeralds shook the branches of the maples
that sang as hollow springs that reached for sun
upon undone confessions still did bring to staple
memories upon the wickedness of one.

Disheveled beggars standing on the pine combs
wept of white lies written in the snow
What shattered sprinkle chased beneath the wrinkled poems
of portraits blackened with the chase of show
sang harmony to abstract moons ablaze
with Dian humming, happy in her hills
across the slow phase
of our fading thrills.

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Wed 03/10/10 10:46 PM
Beyond amazing. Glad you're posting again.flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Thu 03/11/10 07:33 AM
Way beyond amazing!

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Fri 03/12/10 03:52 PM
I'm speechless-...now you know better than that:wink:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 03/15/10 02:46 PM
drinker flowerforyou

bastet126's photo
Mon 03/15/10 05:26 PM
and that's what perfect looks like flowerforyou

mig25's photo
Mon 03/15/10 06:41 PM
What can one say? Really, this was perfect!