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i just joined the site today, looking for my dream girl :) ive never been very good at writing these little profile things so tell me what you think. thaaaaaaaaaaaaaanx!
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I don't see anything wrong with what you wrote. You are being you. And thier has never been anything wrong with ppl being them selves..
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I don't see anything wrong with what you wrote. You are being you. And thier has never been anything wrong with ppl being them selves.. apparantly there is something wrong when i be myself..i been single 4ever |
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I don't see anything wrong with what you wrote. You are being you. And thier has never been anything wrong with ppl being them selves.. apparantly there is something wrong when i be myself..i been single 4ever |
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I don't see anything wrong with what you wrote. You are being you. And thier has never been anything wrong with ppl being them selves.. apparantly there is something wrong when i be myself..i been single 4ever ya know what is sad is i kinda like me lol |
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It's good but a little sparse. You express yourself well, and I think you might want to flesh it out a little. Not saying you need to make it 1440 pages long (that's my job) but a little more information about you and your life and your hopes for the future couldn't hurt.
Might want to add a few more pics, too. People around here tend to be alarmingly visually-oriented sometimes. |
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It's good but a little sparse. You express yourself well, and I think you might want to flesh it out a little. Not saying you need to make it 1440 pages long (that's my job) but a little more information about you and your life and your hopes for the future couldn't hurt. Might want to add a few more pics, too. People around here tend to be alarmingly visually-oriented sometimes. True, that's why I like torturing them with pics of my feet. |
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It's good but a little sparse. You express yourself well, and I think you might want to flesh it out a little. Not saying you need to make it 1440 pages long (that's my job) but a little more information about you and your life and your hopes for the future couldn't hurt. Might want to add a few more pics, too. People around here tend to be alarmingly visually-oriented sometimes. True, that's why I like torturing them with pics of my feet. At least you're not holding up a fish. Don't get any ideas, either. There are way too many cliches around here as it is! |
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It's good but a little sparse. You express yourself well, and I think you might want to flesh it out a little. Not saying you need to make it 1440 pages long (that's my job) but a little more information about you and your life and your hopes for the future couldn't hurt. Might want to add a few more pics, too. People around here tend to be alarmingly visually-oriented sometimes. True, that's why I like torturing them with pics of my feet. At least you're not holding up a fish. Don't get any ideas, either. There are way too many cliches around here as it is! I think I'd look better holding up a big gun. I could borrow one of my grand dad's and channel Sara Palin.... |
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It's good but a little sparse. You express yourself well, and I think you might want to flesh it out a little. Not saying you need to make it 1440 pages long (that's my job) but a little more information about you and your life and your hopes for the future couldn't hurt. Might want to add a few more pics, too. People around here tend to be alarmingly visually-oriented sometimes. True, that's why I like torturing them with pics of my feet. Iknow that this is off-topic but those are nice feet. |
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i just joined the site today, looking for my dream girl :) ive never been very good at writing these little profile things so tell me what you think. thaaaaaaaaaaaaaanx! On a more serious note, I'd say that overall I like it... if I were a young lady w/ similar interests I might contact you. You're cute, speak well, seem honest and intelligent... However, there's another part of me that worries for ya'. It kinda' sounds like all you want to do is get laid... (no offense, been there, done that.) It's just that there's a lot of freaks out there, so be careful. Hugz, best of luck. |
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i just joined the site today, looking for my dream girl :) ive never been very good at writing these little profile things so tell me what you think. thaaaaaaaaaaaaaanx! On a more serious note, I'd say that overall I like it... if I were a young lady w/ similar interests I might contact you. You're cute, speak well, seem honest and intelligent... However, there's another part of me that worries for ya'. It kinda' sounds like all you want to do is get laid... (no offense, been there, done that.) It's just that there's a lot of freaks out there, so be careful. Hugz, best of luck. seriously?? i tried to make sure it didnt sound like that! i thought it was pretty clear that im looking for a relationship...damn... any tips to fix that?? |
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Teditis
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Wed 03/10/10 12:33 PM
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i just joined the site today, looking for my dream girl :) ive never been very good at writing these little profile things so tell me what you think. thaaaaaaaaaaaaaanx! On a more serious note, I'd say that overall I like it... if I were a young lady w/ similar interests I might contact you. You're cute, speak well, seem honest and intelligent... However, there's another part of me that worries for ya'. It kinda' sounds like all you want to do is get laid... (no offense, been there, done that.) It's just that there's a lot of freaks out there, so be careful. Hugz, best of luck. seriously?? i tried to make sure it didnt sound like that! i thought it was pretty clear that im looking for a relationship...damn... any tips to fix that?? LOL...Firstly, maybe it's not so bad that you wanna get laid, if that’s the case. We're sexual beings after all, (so to speak). The things that made me think that getting laid was important to you were: “ i love to party really hard so i would love a girl who does the same”; “ive had a few gfs in the past but they all ended up being simply bi-curious” & “i really want to find someone special who will be willing to work with a beginner lol”. For me, stated separately they would be ambiguous (a hint). Together, it’s 3 hints, which implies some importance in a profile that’s 7-8 lines long. Like I said before, it’s a good post as it stands and I mean that. You don’t have to change anything... I might be the only one reading too much into it. It wouldn’t be the first time for me to be wrong. But since you asked, maybe change the last line to read something like: “i have to admit that ive never been with a girl more then a couple weeks and ive never...been...with a girl. believe me, its not by choice! lol. now I think that im more interested in the relationship and if it leads to more then that’s great too.” Still, that’s coming from a 48y/o, straight male… maybe there are others who could word it better. Hugz, GL |
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It's good but a little sparse. You express yourself well, and I think you might want to flesh it out a little. Not saying you need to make it 1440 pages long (that's my job) but a little more information about you and your life and your hopes for the future couldn't hurt. Might want to add a few more pics, too. People around here tend to be alarmingly visually-oriented sometimes. True, that's why I like torturing them with pics of my feet. Iknow that this is off-topic but those are nice feet. Thanks. |
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Hi!!!!
Tammy |
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i just joined the site today, looking for my dream girl :) ive never been very good at writing these little profile things so tell me what you think. thaaaaaaaaaaaaaanx! On a more serious note, I'd say that overall I like it... if I were a young lady w/ similar interests I might contact you. You're cute, speak well, seem honest and intelligent... However, there's another part of me that worries for ya'. It kinda' sounds like all you want to do is get laid... (no offense, been there, done that.) It's just that there's a lot of freaks out there, so be careful. Hugz, best of luck. seriously?? i tried to make sure it didnt sound like that! i thought it was pretty clear that im looking for a relationship...damn... any tips to fix that?? LOL...Firstly, maybe it's not so bad that you wanna get laid, if that’s the case. We're sexual beings after all, (so to speak). The things that made me think that getting laid was important to you were: “ i love to party really hard so i would love a girl who does the same”; “ive had a few gfs in the past but they all ended up being simply bi-curious” & “i really want to find someone special who will be willing to work with a beginner lol”. For me, stated separately they would be ambiguous (a hint). Together, it’s 3 hints, which implies some importance in a profile that’s 7-8 lines long. Like I said before, it’s a good post as it stands and I mean that. You don’t have to change anything... I might be the only one reading too much into it. It wouldn’t be the first time for me to be wrong. But since you asked, maybe change the last line to read something like: “i have to admit that ive never been with a girl more then a couple weeks and ive never...been...with a girl. believe me, its not by choice! lol. now I think that im more interested in the relationship and if it leads to more then that’s great too.” Still, that’s coming from a 48y/o, straight male… maybe there are others who could word it better. Hugz, GL well when i say party im not talking about sex lol but i totally understand that one. the only reason i make the beginner comment is because i want the girl i meet to know that im not experienced and that i might not be too good in bed |
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i just joined the site today, looking for my dream girl :) ive never been very good at writing these little profile things so tell me what you think. thaaaaaaaaaaaaaanx! On a more serious note, I'd say that overall I like it... if I were a young lady w/ similar interests I might contact you. You're cute, speak well, seem honest and intelligent... However, there's another part of me that worries for ya'. It kinda' sounds like all you want to do is get laid... (no offense, been there, done that.) It's just that there's a lot of freaks out there, so be careful. Hugz, best of luck. seriously?? i tried to make sure it didnt sound like that! i thought it was pretty clear that im looking for a relationship...damn... any tips to fix that?? LOL...Firstly, maybe it's not so bad that you wanna get laid, if that’s the case. We're sexual beings after all, (so to speak). The things that made me think that getting laid was important to you were: “ i love to party really hard so i would love a girl who does the same”; “ive had a few gfs in the past but they all ended up being simply bi-curious” & “i really want to find someone special who will be willing to work with a beginner lol”. For me, stated separately they would be ambiguous (a hint). Together, it’s 3 hints, which implies some importance in a profile that’s 7-8 lines long. Like I said before, it’s a good post as it stands and I mean that. You don’t have to change anything... I might be the only one reading too much into it. It wouldn’t be the first time for me to be wrong. But since you asked, maybe change the last line to read something like: “i have to admit that ive never been with a girl more then a couple weeks and ive never...been...with a girl. believe me, its not by choice! lol. now I think that im more interested in the relationship and if it leads to more then that’s great too.” Still, that’s coming from a 48y/o, straight male… maybe there are others who could word it better. Hugz, GL well when i say party im not talking about sex lol but i totally understand that one. the only reason i make the beginner comment is because i want the girl i meet to know that im not experienced and that i might not be too good in bed "i have to admit that ive never been with a girl more then a couple weeks and ive never...been...with a girl." Makes that point clear. Besides, none of us are as we'd like to be and very few are as good as they say they are... but you'll learn that as you go. |
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Oh my sweet little thing!!!
Just close your eyes... And dream of lollipops!!!!! |
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r u rolling ur eyes, and sticking ur tongue out? what r u trying 2 tell us? inquiring happy hump day minglers would like 2 know.
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Oh my sweet little thing!!! Just close your eyes... And dream of lollipops!!!!! im not exactly sure why but this made me laugh my *** off! oh and Duffy, i was just trying to be cute!! im not that good at it :P *fishing for compliments* |
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