Topic: Five Word Changes Away From Being A Suicide Note.
starryeyeddolly's photo
Wed 06/13/07 12:12 PM
This is five word changes
Away from a suicide note
But I thought I was better now
I thought I had it all figured out
Tears run down chubby cheeks
I wish I could tell you
I love you
Force medication into shaking
Little hands
Blue eyes cry
As you tell me
I am not what you wish
I could be
I’m sorry
Everything fell off the shelfs
In the earthquake of my pain
Life really isn’t all that bad, right?
But when you are dieing silently
It feels like it
Don’t give me that bull****
“It will get better”
“Life isn’t all that bad”
Attention whore
Is tired of negative attention
Attention whore
Wants you to love her more
Just a little more
Please?

papa295's photo
Wed 06/13/07 01:33 PM
that was beautiful u wrote it

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 06/13/07 03:03 PM
Well I know you have heard it a hundred times so here is
a hundred and one. If you need someone to talk to e-mail
me. Sometimes life does suck and things all seem to be
closing around us to the point we feel as if we can breath.
But truth is it can and will get better but you must be
willing to try. Suicide at times seems to be the answer
but you know as well as I do most really don't want to
go down that road. Yeah I may not have all the answers
in life but I will be more than gladly to listen to you
and be there. Here is my hand all you have to do is reach
for it.flowerforyou