kay...so I'm new...but this was the forum that appealed to me the most heh so here I am ^_^

first, I'm a hopeless romantic and second, this has nothing to do with the Phantom of the Opera lol the name just turned out that way *shrugs* lemme know what you think ^^ any advice would be must appreciated too

Like a dove in the sunlight,a raven at night,
This vision is perfect with you in my sight.
Stay with me, guide me, and always be there.
I'll give you my all and together we'll share
All of the moments, the good and the bad,
The confusion I give you, the pain that you've had.
I want you right by me for all of my days,
I need you beside me, forever, always.
Please give me the comfort of your mere presence,
Your sumptuous voice always helps me "un-tense"
In return I will be there, your strength and your shield.
I'll protect you forever, make your troubles all yield.
I know it sounds silly, I'm unfit for the part,
But I want to protect you with all of my heart.
My words have no meaning, my actions show true
Let me help keep that smile I love so much on you.
I'll vanquish your foes, shove your fears out of sight,
Keep you safe from the shadows, keep you out of the night.
If you let me I'll try even though I may fail,
But I'll keep trying harder to finish our tale.
I'll take you, I'll wisk you, someplace you'll be free
From all of your troubles, be only with me.
For you my dear love I'd forsake everything,
To be with you love, I'd risk my whole being.
If you call out a warning, just one swift alarm,
I'll be there at once to keep you from harm,
I'll give you the touch you so desperately need
I'll fill your esteem, be your spiritual feed.
To keep you from peril I'd die if I must.
I'd never do anything to betray your trust.
I'll never once lie or withold the truth,
For other young lovers, I have not a use.
You're the only one for me, all I'll ever want.
To me, you are perfect, even with all your faults.
They make you the better, though you think them the worst.
If ever you lost them, I'd think myself cursed.
Though I'd still love the new you I'd miss how you were
I'd mourn for the loss, of that I'm quite sure.
But enough of my fancies, they'll never come true.
No matter how much I want it, I'm unfit for you.
You deserve so much better, someone perfect like you.
A sad, flawed, little person like me just won't do.
So I'll stay in the shadows, I'll keep cheering you on
And pushing you farther to find that perfect one.
Yet they still won't be perfect for you in my eyes,
No one will lest they're gods, who watch on from up high.
Since I know my desires will never come true,
To be right beside you's all I ask of you.

Very, very nice. Thank you for sharing! But that last part is pretty sad....

you have a lot of emotion, longing and desire packed into this piece.

welcome to the site...



(sorry had to edit cause you are new and i didn't wish to offend you)

"Sweet sorrow"...

thank you! I'm glad I was able to convey the emotions well enough in this one ^^

welcome and thanks for posting